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- Def-init
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Def Shines
As da horizon shines from da subsidin tides
Da 'Def-init' rises upon da isle of time
Crushin all in front of me
tarin down verses N rippin shit apart like sodomy
All I need iz my blessed superior skill
Possessed wit intent tah thrill
N blood spills since God gave free will
I’ll never feel second best like a stepson’s father
I'm a cross of butcher N pit, mixed wit a bit of boxer,
attackin wit da mentality of Jeffery Dahmer N Brock Lesnar.
U just a product of several sexual incestial partners.
A soldier’s story is a hidden agenda 4 da bitch made
Like da tragic tale of internet fame. N fuck...
a wack wigga wit attitude lookin 4 niggas tah blame
Sellin cain, no shame, Ur murder I attained, bitch, settle!
My curved blades chargin on sands dat rumble
N be glad I'm jus' passin thru when u tremble
Ill explode all over a poser with da wrath of an arch angle
Like Michael on amphetamines turnin physco, radiatin like Tranoble
an fuck feds sent tah me on streets, I’m loco
Ill rearrange da physical frame of any fed in my crib
Scorchin souls so hot, u'd trade honor for water in a shitty ad-lib
I’ll leave u feelin blue ya see, I’d be like U was claiming crip, G.
N Id humble every MC on dis page if it'd bring back Pimp C.
See, I’m Moses, a profit with profit from ur corpses.
Endorse dis N I’m remorseless, a horseman,
da chosen! Da lyrical Shogun!
Fuck ya forced rhymes man. My physical frame,
QB' wit a bit of 'Line's-Man!
I’m survivn da streets bein da last one standin
with a show of force so immaculate ur frozen
I speak on da weak in past-tense wit lastin suspense
Here looms da Shadowy stench of war N puddles of piss
I'm hardcore; I’m horrorcore fuckin a bitch raw, see, she missin tolerance,
N like my Jesus piece I do my best tah honor it N settle da score
N in da Middle East, more N more cry out for justice, consider me there guarantor
Cement blocks hittin da ocean floor as every mother-fucker feels my rapport
Gats sparkin like dis da festival of lights
I smoke da best dosia, Northern Lights!
I soar tah new heights crushin civil rights
while preformin a soldiers last rites!
keystyle or written, my recited writes ignite cuz tonight I excite...
I spit wit anger, a democratic prisoner fighting 4 rights
Infrared beams, dreams of stacks, gats, fats N new Nikes!
scared wishin 4 protection like New Yorkers boardin flights
I’ll win while strapped tah spinal tap ya fuckin back in battle
Sendin hidden messages, like when a neuron from da synapse travels
That'll stable ya vocals, u aint useful wit metal
N that'll get ya ass in trouble.
I’ve seen terror; seen brutality that'll make ya wet ur panties
Like Anne Frank did when Nazi soldiers took her family
Survivin wit no hope N I do mean karma,
da type in da Hindu sacred triad about Shiva
Livin life in dis Dopamine Orchestra
mixin Vodka handlin all mother-fuckin vendettas
It's illogically logical lettin lettuce let us
transgress N suppress progress.
I think dats bullshit! Like sales-tax.
N Wit incredible raps, ill stop a snitches text dead in its tracks
Last edited by Def-init on Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:33 am, edited 3 times in total.
- If I can't bend Heaven, I shall move Hell. -
Re: Def Shines
Try 2 Use A Better Font Color Next Time Its 2 Dim!!
Overall The Drop Is Pretty Dope Alot Of Wordplay N Symbolic Defination!!
You Came Up In Your Rhymes Totally Bro, Keep Elevating
Overall The Drop Is Pretty Dope Alot Of Wordplay N Symbolic Defination!!
You Came Up In Your Rhymes Totally Bro, Keep Elevating
- Def-init
- Elite Freestyler
- Posts: 274
- Joined: Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:48 am
- Wins: 3
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Re: Def Shines
Thx, fam.
lol hatin on the font? I will enlarge it.
lol hatin on the font? I will enlarge it.
- If I can't bend Heaven, I shall move Hell. -
Re: Def Shines
i'm liking this piece but u should switch it to the left, easier to read and catch the flow.
I was liking ur vocab, multies are ok but like i said the flow is off due to it being centered. it works better like that on shorter pieces or if its broken into paragraphs. anyway decent read, keep at it.
rtf please
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/relat ... 16171.html
I was liking ur vocab, multies are ok but like i said the flow is off due to it being centered. it works better like that on shorter pieces or if its broken into paragraphs. anyway decent read, keep at it.
rtf please
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/relat ... 16171.html
- Def-init
- Elite Freestyler
- Posts: 274
- Joined: Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:48 am
- Wins: 3
- Losses: 3
- Location: Toronto
Re: Def Shines
Thx for the feed bro.
I will post my next drop aligned to the left.
I will post my next drop aligned to the left.
- If I can't bend Heaven, I shall move Hell. -
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