ready to bounce when i start sobering up
u aint realized i call when i wanna come over n fuck
i only call into the late of the night
then leave when i lay down the pipe
but you never attempt to shake off this thug.
if i loved you. id take off the glove
all i want is just to fold them hips
shove my tank into them swollen lips
girl you aint no gal of mine.
newsflash wonder why i wasnt there for valentine's
no heart, never been a man of guilt.
you was home alone, i wuz crusin vanderbilt
i stay cause you buy me shit to rock this summer
& you know dez dudes got generic pop like dr thunder
cause i dont love you. you plt these hoes against me
they not leaving cause i keep doe like oprah winfrey
ima keep 100 when i line these fakes out
think we be in public girl, we eating chinese takeout
i dont luv you
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Re: i dont luv you
This is a horribly structured, uncreative piece of shit. Grow a vocabulary, breed it with an imagination, and try again. Or maybe stick to the scriptures, your call.
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Re: i dont luv you
Don't listen to Double F.L ( aka C.Cs double aka Chris crocker's double) she's a female err i think...She has no idea what she's talking about... and TOYH types in pink...
It's alright.
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It's alright.
Come and kneel before the great Dosia...and you will be blessed with skills beyond your wildest dreams!
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Re: i dont luv you
Substinence will get you further than stupidity, jussouno.
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Re: i dont luv you
eh...
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Re: i dont luv you
this was more of a cypher.. i put it in the wrong spot..
and for poetic juggernaut, u can go fuck yourself...
and for poetic juggernaut, u can go fuck yourself...
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