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Hey everybody my name is Dylan. im not quite sure to start really...Ive lately gained an interest in rapping/freestyling. These past few months have been super stressful and depressing and the only thing that has really kept my spirits up is music. Music has always had a very powerful impact on my life and i include it in my everyday routine. However as i said above lately i have become greatly interested in rapping/freestyling i beleave it feel that music, rap in general has really giving me alot over the years and i want to start to give it back i owe it to take part. So with that out of the way i have been trying to just write as much as i can but i havnt been able to get anything really it just seems like extreme writers block or maybe im nervous to cross the line if you guys follow me, im buying "the rappers handbook" ebook and i think that will help me out alot but in the mean time what can i do to get the creative juices flowing....
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yo bro first introduce urself in the introduction thread.....

then 2nd go to the scripts and post some of the shit you've writtin so then we will see what level your at...

cuz right now we dont know if your rakim or just another no person trying to improve

you need to post your shit so we know where we can help you improve than ask around for ppl to battle and to collab with that will help you so go post your shit....
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another thing dawg, is listen to the audio chamber to get tips on recording if thats what ur about. or, read alot of the drops in the scriptures. u can learn alot from the cats on here. youll kinda see how to structure, what type of poet u wanna be or jus pick up tips. fact of the matter is, u gotta start somewhere. and always know, not everyone will like ur shit. the sooner u get that in ur head, the more fearless youll be when droppin sumtn or creatin sumtn. welcome tho. everyone on here is legit wit errythin so i wouldnt hesitate to ask if ur confused.


Loon E out........
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Xtaci wrote:yo bro first introduce urself in the introduction thread.....

then 2nd go to the scripts and post some of the shit you've writtin so then we will see what level your at...

cuz right now we dont know if your rakim or just another no person trying to improve
lol i already did that! that was my first post :)


Loon E Lou wrote:another thing dawg, is listen to the audio chamber to get tips on recording if thats what ur about. or, read alot of the drops in the scriptures. u can learn alot from the cats on here. youll kinda see how to structure, what type of poet u wanna be or jus pick up tips. fact of the matter is, u gotta start somewhere. and always know, not everyone will like ur shit. the sooner u get that in ur head, the more fearless youll be when droppin sumtn or creatin sumtn. welcome tho. everyone on here is legit wit errythin so i wouldnt hesitate to ask if ur confused.

Loon E out........

thanks man that was very incitful..i wrote alot but i seem to just write in huge blocks in you know what i mean and theres no real basis or structer like here are of the rhymnes i wrote over the past few days.....


ill stab you with the end of a broom, then throw salt in the wound!
did you hear that? im a f**kin bafoon.
i smoked so much tree with mike boon,
i hope we didnt stink up the room.
my flows are wrekless,
so keepin talkin b***hes you know you wanna sex this.
dont think im easy just because i dress neat,
one shot,
one kill,
you dead at my feet.


my rhymes are sick like slick rick with slit wrists.
im so gutta,
but im a d-boy so i got the bread and the butta.
i like peanut butter sandwhichs with fluff-a-nutter,
F**K your mother.
im so complex because theres no contest

just simple stuff but not really and basis im just rhyming in circles i think
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yo bro post that in the scrips it wont get love here
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Xtaci wrote:yo bro post that in the scrips it wont get love here

do you think its worthy of love?
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tha shit was pretty basic. kinda like u jus tried to make shit ryme. but all in all props for droppin sumtn. maybe a lil more effort. the difference between ordinary and extraordinary is jus that lil "extra." haha. keep it movin tho youll catch on
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you need to make rhymes without forcing them that mike boon line seems random but thats what i started like
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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naw homie i dont think u should really buy the rappers handbook ebook. i've read some of it, nd to be honest i kinda think its bullshit.

just rap what u feel, and if nothings comin to u, like said above, dont force it. jus try to concentrate. what do u wanna say in the rap. if ur really just starting, try to just rap about anything to build ur technique. in my opinion, freestyling and writing go hand in hand (at least for me) so if i hav writer's block, i wont be able to spit a very good freestyle.
but try to freestyle pretty often, but not too much. definitely spend more of ur time writing,
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