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peep this, (best shit u eva gonna read)

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I advance with several celestial sword swinging horsemen
Projecting blasphemous satanic chapters in fractions towards men
Leave your physical figure disfigured in ritualistic symbols of art
rip you apart with encrypted lyrics that'll cripple your heart
split you in half with sadistic methods developed in darkness
leave you impaled on a crucifix and laugh at the swell of your carcass
render you senseless, tear the thoughts in your head in two
dismember you with venomous testaments, heavenly sent to you
remove your spinal cordwith a vile sword and a primal roar
pierce your spleen and make your bile pour in the feast of this tribal war
rip your mind in four and shatter your frame in six ways
then take a switch blade and engrave my name in your rib cage
extract what matters with methods from heretical tomes
strip the flesh from your domes, shatter what's left of your bones
bring you death from the throne, have you approaching riggor mortis
my trigger force is so precise it'll leave your lipids sorted
you twisted portions of Creation are just a fallacy to rap
and your mentality is flat when I make your gallaxies collapse
throw your planets out of orbit and distort your solar systems
blast your dust through nebular clusters and abort your whole existance
I thrust mystic fists into your mentals equipped with scriptures of old
and leave the inner walls of your skull with my name enscripted in gold...

to be continued...
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Damn. That was sick:
bring you death from the throne, have you approaching riggor mortis
my trigger force is so precise it'll leave your lipids sorted
Ridiculous.
I don't drop rhymes all the time, but when I do, I prefer to spit fire
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epic verse uppin for the rest
I drop more dope than fucking top shotters
call me korean meatballs coz im the dogs bollox
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This was crazy on a different level
I'm digging the thoughts of this for real

advance with several celestial sword swinging horsemen
Projecting blasphemous satanic chapters in fractions towards men
Leave your physical figure disfigured in ritualistic symbols of art

that was dope as fuck
keep writing my dude!

-- Fri Nov 13, 2009 4:33 pm --

This was crazy on a different level
I'm digging the thoughts of this for real

advance with several celestial sword swinging horsemen
Projecting blasphemous satanic chapters in fractions towards men
Leave your physical figure disfigured in ritualistic symbols of art

that was dope as fuck
keep writing my dude!
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Post by Absolute »

this is dope, but i feel it really picked up after the "rip your mind in four". everything after that was good..keep it up
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Post by precise »

this was awsome, i like reading horrorcore/biblical verses

reminds me of my older style, great job dude, rhymes n vocabulary were crazy
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Post by deafshady »

yo yo this illest n sick n i m wanting hear tat more cos i m feel u just like evryone feel me on my other lyrics
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