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Push Me Away

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Haz
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Push Me Away

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my glowing shine, know in time
i'll either meet your wishes
or never make the visit
i held you up in times of tragedy
the clock of disaster aimed for me
i'm sorry you have to see lifes map for me
it branched from your roots though..
just listen cause your to blind to see
my side of things
because you want a better side of me
i protected you..
as you never neglected me
but are bonds in affect to see
what? how far you can push me..
not over the edge but away..
push me a way like never before
cheat me by settling the score..
i don't mean to hurt you
i want your pain like a first car.
atleast i can drive your pain away
please don't push me away as i push..
towards you in the end it pulls me apart
friction..
you claim i'm bright but in the dark
knowing i wasn't provided with a spark
please..don't push me away
to please yourself like begging.
I beg in a manor so rude
get my point till it breaks your skin
i'm prepared to win..
please don't push me away..
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Re: Push Me Away

Post by eric »

Epic! I am impressed by your skill level at such a young age son.

Your multifaceted approach to this technical poem has gave many inspiration.

May I bless you.
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Re: Push Me Away

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Thanks Buddy. Drop a Piece so i Can leave you Feed
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Re: Push Me Away

Post by Glamtrash »

I quite like it.

I know my feed is shitty right now, it's really late lol. I promise I'll feed this better tomorrow.
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