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PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
bite on this
KISS MY ASS AM SERBIAN
I found enlightenment at the bottom of a bottle I spoke to buddha and he told me I was tequila worm in past life
I found enlightenment at the bottom of a bottle I spoke to buddha and he told me I was tequila worm in past life
Re: PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
haha this shit is crazy..it's got a a play around vibe to it...
the first verse guy has decent mic presence..but theres some rhyme scheme ..trouble on it..
the hooks funny..lmao
the second verse starts aight but there's some grammar issues it sounds like a freestyle cuz it falls off lyrically more and more as it goes on..it's kinda simple even for a party fun type song..imo
umm the mixx is decent but the kicks might need a bit more bump..and the vocal quality sounds pretty crisp so that's a plus...
just keep workin on ya writing to help elevate yaself..1
the first verse guy has decent mic presence..but theres some rhyme scheme ..trouble on it..
the hooks funny..lmao
the second verse starts aight but there's some grammar issues it sounds like a freestyle cuz it falls off lyrically more and more as it goes on..it's kinda simple even for a party fun type song..imo
umm the mixx is decent but the kicks might need a bit more bump..and the vocal quality sounds pretty crisp so that's a plus...
just keep workin on ya writing to help elevate yaself..1
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^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
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Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!
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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/okay- ... 12393.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tre-t ... 12597.html
http://www.zshare.net/download/6399071566e45a94/
^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
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Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hgN0MacRqg&feature=fvst[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZ-VXwki ... ature=plcp[/video]
It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla
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Re: PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
this shit is alot better than that other track u dropped...million stvari er somethin...lol...the track to me is just funny...just the way u guys went about it...the beat was pretty nice...i think the whole beat could be brought up alot more along with the vocals....but overall pretty decent..keep doin ur thing


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Re: PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
thanks for feeds.am gona
on it

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Re: PTR FEAT SHARPTOOTH
I guess the best way to describe this track would be "interesting" lol
...the hook sounds like a couple of drunk dudes trying to sing to a bitch! haha It was entertaining. Though it was rediculously simple...it was catchy. Which again goes to show that sometimes the most simple things can start a fad!
First verse wasn't bad. But that second verse...
...wow.
Dude was all over the place. To be perfectly honest...he wasn't even making sense at certain parts. But I'm not going to go into details about all that. Listening to it should be self explainatory for everyone. lol
I give it a 5/10
...the hook sounds like a couple of drunk dudes trying to sing to a bitch! haha It was entertaining. Though it was rediculously simple...it was catchy. Which again goes to show that sometimes the most simple things can start a fad!
First verse wasn't bad. But that second verse...
...wow.
Dude was all over the place. To be perfectly honest...he wasn't even making sense at certain parts. But I'm not going to go into details about all that. Listening to it should be self explainatory for everyone. lol
I give it a 5/10
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