" Not A Dream .. "

[Haz]

word

[TreTru]

that beat is sik..that sample is nice..

ya mixx is a lil better than the lat one i peeped..

first verse is lyrically dope..but i think ya outta the pocket a bit on a few lines..IMO

second verse is a bit more on point...i think you'r hittin ya vowel transfers a lil too often for an audio..but thats my style..

ya got some sly lyrics though...kep werkin on the audio though cuz it's steppin up 4 sure...1

[Petrafyne]

Hott Beat I Would Murk This,

I Think The Flow Was Okay, But Seems Your Rhyming At The Wrong Spot Or Switching Vowels Too Often Or At The Wrong Time. Production Seemed Okay, Not The Best Drop I Heard From You But You Gotta Do Somthin To Progress Right?, Holla

[-MenaCe-]

This was decent. Not Bad


Keep em comin haz

[P.T.R-ins]

it was good overall..lil bit slow but good..tho it should be longer i think(and propose)

[Kurse]

Production is bananaz! I like how it samples the New Utah Saints...that shit goes wayyyy back in the day! You've got to have a real culture of music inside of you to fuck with their shit...so i give mad props to the producer.

Mixing is so/so. It's not crisp, but it is clear enough to understand when being listened to. Lyrics were nice, only thing I'd question is the structuring of your flow on here. There's gaps in certain parts of your verse that could be done without...and other parts that the verse seems crammed and could use a break in the flow. Could just be your style...I dunno...but that's just my opinion. Not only that, but this is a harder beat to flow on due to the simplicity of the beat but complexity of the sample.

Decent drop overall...keep doing your thang son.