Back From Hell (sick story)

[JHaze]

I woke up wit pain and no breath to breathe
I looked right, saw hell, guess god rejected me
then when i looked to the left me the devil was next me
this motherfucker starts explainin my death to me
hes talkin now while im movin back progressively
he said that it was a carefully planned hit
scared me to stand stiff, just look at my hands twitch
but damn why you talkin instead of torturing me
He said because you died before your time unfortunately
thats why your in this shit this your predicament
Your killers comin after ya fam before their finished with
Are you showin me mercy?, Im torn and uncertain
he said I could go back and warn just one person
but I didn't have to start to already be done searchin
its an obvious choice so who else but my girl
thats probably the only love that i felt in this world

I say my choice he gives me a twisted grin
says "lets begin just know u cant wish again"
poof Im outside my bedroom now, my homes hall walkin'
stop when I hear my girl on a phone call talkin'
"relax, Im almost packed and then ill be right over
me and you baby were gunna start our lifes over
Cali's gunna be amazing just me next to you
And dont worry about the scene I dont think we left a clue
and when his parents are done we bury the gun
leave this place for good and get prepared for the sun"
im gunna kill this bitch, I need a mask and gat
grab our picture smash the glass and attack with that
think you won your done see whos the last to luagh
but I gotta hold back, react better than clever
make sure her and her man spend forever together
yup right beside me in hell after your necks've been severed

now it isnt just a mission, theres more to the shit
ima murda this bitch and enjoy doin' it
im at my parents house the back deck with a blade
pacin', waitin to make my aggression displayed
see a truck creep by, then i hear em park it
theres no fear in here yo im feelin heartless
I see a shadow comin', under the table i duck
its probably her man while she waits in the truck
hes on the porch now, hes headed for the door
i jump the fuck out, and get him to the floor
cut his throat his rips and his neck a little more
checkin for his weapon then im steppin' to my whore
hold up, after I grab the strap from his waiste
take the jacket off his back, and the mask from his face
a decent disguise as i creep to the ride
whats this bitch gunna think when she sees im alive??
I close the car doors make sure theyre all lock'd
show her my face then I watch her jaw drop
pull out her mans gun and shove it in her mouth
yea baby ima show ya what tough lovin' is about
what? kill me, then leave you thought you could relax
plot plans on my fam i caught you in the act
the shits been flipp'd you look nuaseas as i laugh
you gave me a bullet from this gun, ofcourse ill give it back

this is written for audio theres a chorus n what not, i have it recorded but its not mixed yet so check for this in audio when it does drop, if you'd like to hear the rough mix let me know

[-MenaCe-]

Um...

It was "Ok" could have been alot better.


Keep Em Comin.

[Haz]

I woke up wit pain and no breath to breathe
I looked right, saw hell, guess god rejected me

TALK TO UM!! .. Insane...


then when i looked to the left me the devil was next me
this motherfucker starts explainin my death to me

Lmfao.. Crazy


hes talkin now while im movin back progressively
he said that it was a carefully planned hit
scared me to stand stiff, just look at my hands twitch

Word...

but damn why you talkin instead of torturing me
He said because you died before your time unfortunately
thats why your in this shit this your predicament
Your killers comin after ya fam before their finished with

The Last Line is Confusing...

Are you showin me mercy?, Im torn and uncertain
he said I could go back and warn just one person
but I didn't have to start to already be done searchin
its an obvious choice so who else but my girl
thats probably the only love that i felt in this world

Word..


stop when I hear my girl on a phone call talkin'
"relax, Im almost packed and then ill be right over
me and you baby were gunna start our lifes over
Cali's gunna be amazing just me next to you
And dont worry about the scene I dont think we left a clue

SHIIIIIIT!...


and when his parents are done we bury the gun
leave this place for good and get prepared for the sun"
im gunna kill this bitch, I need a mask and gat
grab our picture smash the glass and attack with that
think you won your done see whos the last to luagh
but I gotta hold back, react better than clever
make sure her and her man spend forever together
yup right beside me in hell after your necks've been severed

Fucking Bananaz... That's What i'm Talkin About U Was Goin Soft Up There^...


now it isnt just a mission, theres more to the shit
ima murda this bitch and enjoy doin' it
im at my parents house the back deck with a blade
pacin', waitin to make my aggression displayed
see a truck creep by, then i hear em park it
theres no fear in here yo im feelin heartless

Straight ...




I see a shadow comin', under the table i duck
its probably her man while she waits in the truck
hes on the porch now, hes headed for the door
i jump the fuck out, and get him to the floor
cut his throat his rips and his neck a little more
checkin for his weapon then im steppin' to my whore
hold up, after I grab the strap from his waiste

Straight...



take the jacket off his back, and the mask from his face
a decent disguise as i creep to the ride
whats this bitch gunna think when she sees im alive??
I close the car doors make sure theyre all lock'd
show her my face then I watch her jaw drop
pull out her mans gun and shove it in her mouth
yea baby ima show ya what tough lovin' is about

This Wus Aiight..

what? kill me, then leave you thought you could relax
plot plans on my fam i caught you in the act
the shits been flipp'd you look nuaseas as i laugh
you gave me a bullet from this gun, ofcourse ill give it back

Cool...


Anyways This Was Pretty Cool.. Had Some Spots That Just Went Bananaz N Some Straight Flow Spots.. i Want To Hear The Audio.. Good Shit... Keep Droppin..

[Viral]

dis shit would be sick as fuck on audio...ill be waitin for it

[TreTru]

Ay Yo...I gotta say i really liked this one the read in itself was exciting and the twist in the plot sikened the pot!!..real talk.. cant wait to hear this audio..
i like them twisted concepts nice drop ..IMO..1