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Lyrical Melodies

Post by Viral »

New track from me HKX n Ekoms....havent dropped shit in a loooong asss time...but heres a lil sumthin sumthin

Verse 1: Viral
Verse 2: Ekoms
Verse 3: HKX

i just added the verse order for those of u that dont know whos who...lol

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You say it's good to hear KO back in the lab...shiiiieettt...it took what? Half of an eternity to hear Viral ANDDD Ekoms on a track again!?! Fuckin snoozers! haha

But nah...clean track. I like it from the lyrical stand-point. I was kinda hoping for a more "out-there" kinda concept, but none the less it was still a good display of your talents. Nice work, obviously niggaz haven't loss their touch!
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we got another track that we all did..its a lil more out there...haha...sorta
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this is fuckin DOPE every verse was on point... this was fuckin sick man... good to hear AME back on top!!!! keep this shit up... i'm hittin the studio on saturday... hopefully friday i dunno i hope to get some shit dropped in the chamber... from the studio... newayz keep this up!!!!
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much appreciated.....u said u kno a dude dat has a studio right?..some shit..lol i forget...dats dope tho...let me kno if u wanna collab if u got a track ur puttin down dis weekend er somethin..ill jump on somethin
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aite man will do... i dunno he said he wants me to collab with this crew called Sexion 8 so i'ma hop on one of there joints plus i'ma put together a mixtape... so i want some people from AME on it! so i'll let u know when production starts on the tape... n hell yeah i'm down on collabin with ya homie...
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this is a laid back type of beat..I like it..
str8 Hip Hop.

First verse..Holy shit that shit's ridiculous..
lyrically dope, multi massacre , but the flow stayed
on point..
Hook ..WTF!! haha this thing is lyrically heinous DAMN..good Shyt

Verse 2 is nice ..actually lyrically good but hit a lil juggle somwhere midway..other than that ..aight.

verse 3 strong with the delivery and flo is on point 4 sure..not as massive with the mutis as the first verse but he had a nice lil flip in it..i was diggin this verse..

anyway keepp bangin dem out...1
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Nice Shit, Very Lyrical

The First Verse Was Really Lyrical, Constant Flow And Stayed In The Pocket.

Hook Was Good Too, Nice Flow

Second Verse Was Prolly The Weakest, There Was Good lyrics But Some Mispronunciation And Timing Issues That Killed It For Me, But Overall It Was Okay.

The Third Was Was Dope, The Flow And Vocals Was On Point, Licks Was Good And Didn't See Any Problem With It.

Nice Underground Type Of Track, This Wouldn't Be My Style Or Choice Of Song But You Guys Did Your Thing And Made It Work, Much Love
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Post by P.T.R-ins »

all i can say to you two dope heads after i hear this isRESPECT really good track ..keep workin 8)
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thanks to yall who dropped feed...ill def return it if i havent already..
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Post by -MenaCe- »

Im feelin this shit.

Nice when you and your boys rip it up in the studio, i kno the feelin and its great.

Nice Drop props to all.
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thanks man...uppin!
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Cool track.

I was most impressed by H's verse.
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cool feed i was most impressed that u even commented...LOL
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much appreciated on the feed mayne....i forgot i posted this track...haha....i should prolly get back on the postin tracks side of things...i got a couple sitting around haha
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