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the begining was gay as fuck dont do all the skipping and repeating the beat was catchy n my opinion.... if seemed like you tried to rap till u ran outa breath then dere would be da pause of you taken a deep breath here and thier.... i don't kno wat u are sayn lmao but it sounds like u are monotones like u are showin no emotion at all in this rhyme
all i understood was problem...lol...????....its kinda hard to judge someone rapping in another language...but besides that...u seemed to have a somewhat decent flow...i suppose....but ur voice sounds stuck in morning mode
it is morning mode...igot up n record it..but any way my lungs are whack....cant stand the pressure....anyway txnk for feedback
,,,if any1 wana beat i will make it..but better to know ...you wont get it if you dont show that you need decent beat
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