"Truth" -- Jahai, Deciple and Lawgix verse's

[Deciple]

7 Rappers, 8 min, Straight Flow.

1st verse - Jahai.
2nd - Deciple.
3rd- Lawgix.

This is a Massive collab song that im doing with some of my homeboys. The part i have put up is only 3 out of 7 rappers featured on this track.. 2 of your very own Lawgix and myself is on this track spittin some TRUTH that people need to hear. Leave some feed back and get ready to hear the rest of it in a min.
Leave me some feedback on what you think so far.
Thanks all.
~~Deciple~~

[Kurse]

If this joint is only 3 artists deep and already around 4 and a half minutes at this point...then it's most likely going to be more than 8 minutes long. And at that length of a track...it had best be fire other wise it's gonna be a ZzZzZzZzZ-Fest! Feel me!?!

I'm not trying to rain on your parade or concept either, so don't get it twisted. I'm just sayin that unless it's gonna be the hottest obnoxiously long remix since Busta's "Touch It" ...then most people probably aren't going to sit around and listen to an 8 minute track, let alone maybe a 5 or 6 minute track. See what I'm getting at.

I listened to what you've dropped thus far, and at most the only thing I can say about it lyrically is that it's mediocre. Beat is alright, mixing is mid-grade at most...like to see you exercise different concepts. (though i do know you're a christian rapper which draws lines in the sand in which you can touch) But it's just a suggestion.

[Petrafyne]

I Was Feelin Your Part More Than The Other Two, Just Because It's More Of My Taste In Rap Style, It Was A lot Cleaner Than The Ohter Two. I Thought The Rhymes You Used Was Pretty Basic, But The Thing That Hit Me Was You Used So Much Basic Rhymes, But I Know It's Hard When You Got A Quick Style. Overall So Far I Thought This Was Better Than Your Drop Before This, A Little Better Mixing On This, A Hook Or Two And I Would Wrap This Up, With 7 People This Is Goina Be Extremely Long, I Would Hate To Go Last On A Track Like This. But Good Work I Like It So Far, Except The Last Dude's Entry Into His Verse, Sounds Like Some Shit Straight Outta Eminem's Track Yellow Brick Road, Keep It Up.

[~Symbolikull~]

first verse - i wasnt really feelin much

second verse - thought it was a dope flow

third verse - a lil low - lyrically it was pretty dope

good message fellas - like they said add a hook and call it a wrap!

[Deciple]

I am going to throw in a hook, The other rappers didnt rap near as long. 2 of the others only did like a 6 bar each and then the other did a 8 bar. i am going to put a hook after my verse (2nd verse) and then have the 2 6 bars and then lawgix and then hook and then 8 bar and imma close it.
Thanks for the feed.

[eMCee Havic]

yeah i liked pretty much the whole thing, first dudes flow was madd crazy, yours was quicker but road the beat well. and lawgix always brings the dope tracks, over alll it was tight.

good drop

[MOEstradamus]

i would just do 2 verses then a hook that should cut off about a min of it but good shit i wasn't feelin the first dude and deciple you other drop was hotter than this lawgix was the only one that stood out to me and ive heard him sound better but keep it up its not bad just ive heard you both spit harder

[Rec]

deciple was the best one

[MOEstradamus]

your gona have to have ppl mix together on some verses just like in the touch it remix

[Deciple]

Thanks for the feed everyone.. much appreciated. and M.O.E. I do have people mixing verses. the rest of the rappers only have at most 10 bars then there are some 4 bars and all.. the song will only be like 6 min long. and there is a hook that comes after the 1st 2 rappers and then after the next 3 and then closing.

[MOEstradamus]

i wana hear the finished one

[Deciple]

Finished Product coming Aug 8th. Just got a new studio so getting sorted and all. Thanks for the feed. ill post up some more later
~~Deciple~~