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eMCee Havic
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I'm Hellbound

Post by eMCee Havic »

just a piece of a song, need to get a new recordin program.

just lookin for some feed on it.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... ID=7851389

i'll add sound click later
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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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Post by - Mutual - »

mayne nice the quality is good an shyt
i'm doin a song on this beat aswell as it happens
nice shyt
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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uppin
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

why does it jus cut off while ur still rappin? and i think u should of waited to drop the whole song feed would of been better, the verse lyrically was pretty ill, u stayed on point wit the flow for the most part, needs a lil more energy, vocals were a lil low. i wanna hear the whole song so get that shit finished
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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