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(Hot Track) Up In The Sky
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(Hot Track) Up In The Sky
I would like to know what you guys think, I need some feedback. Thanks
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Re: (Hot Track) Up In The Sky
Im feelin that homie...
the production sounds good and tha flow is on point for the most part....
Nice Shyt.....
the production sounds good and tha flow is on point for the most part....
Nice Shyt.....
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Re: (Hot Track) Up In The Sky
Thanks I appreciate it
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Re: (Hot Track) Up In The Sky
why vocode the intro talking? makes no sense, oh you did it for the hook too, verses are good too wayne influenced though nobody wants to listen to somebody that isn't original, hook is aight not good not bad phaser/vocoding sounds bad, beats cool
overall you need to get your own style if you want people to listen to your music being influenced is one thing but you imitate the way wayne writes and the way he raps down to a t, you do the vocal switches and deliver the simple similes the same way he does this doesn't even really sound like an original track it just seems like a wayne imitation/cover and thats definately not a good look
overall you need to get your own style if you want people to listen to your music being influenced is one thing but you imitate the way wayne writes and the way he raps down to a t, you do the vocal switches and deliver the simple similes the same way he does this doesn't even really sound like an original track it just seems like a wayne imitation/cover and thats definately not a good look
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Re: (Hot Track) Up In The Sky
You did like take all of lil waynes style, tried his voice, his delivery and all.. The hook was better then the verses.. it was ight. and like Hollywood said.. sounding like lil wayne is definitely not good. also like he said.. what makes a good rapper is that you can come up with originality. Im sure all the lil wayne fans would dig this but that is a short list. Over all.. Not bad.
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I can do everything through him who gives me strength.
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Re: (Hot Track) Up In The Sky
damn u sound like wayne homie beat was dope but if ur gonna be droppin shit don't imitate niggaz cuz niggaz will talk regardless if u think its dope or not if u sound like Wayne which u did not a good sign on ur part
hope u drop sumthin wit ur own style on it next time track is decent minus da wayne imitation
keep droppin 1
hope u drop sumthin wit ur own style on it next time track is decent minus da wayne imitation
keep droppin 1
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