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u never put in work or smoked a blunt, where u from hater?
your only similarity to weed is that your a "chronic Mastrbater"
Im waitin for saints n got no patients delayin reincarnation
forgotten and forsaken for four days-n fuckin whores-waist-in
blast u wit a kamehameha like saiyans, leave u on shores-decayin
On tour-amazin and of course-blazin, wrap up ur corpse-layin'..
on rigged-daggers, dazed n spinnin on the orbit of saturn
I stagger rappers, their next freestyle is conffesions to a pastor
Yall run faster than wack blunts, dried up retired like old bang cunts
despose of ur key boards cuz u cant even respond so stroll back up
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Post by $harky »

Aight drop, flowed in place and didnt in others.
Got the point through tho, only complaint is that it was so short.
Nice drop homes
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Post by MOEstradamus »

nice drop need a lil work on multis they didn't match up all the time
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