Muchacho Man Vs. NoVeL (Muchucacho wins 3-0)

[Ambiguous Realm]

5 bars
first to 5 votes 3-0=ko,4-1=tko

-categories-

punches
flow
rhymescheme(multies)
wordplay
nameplay
personals
complexity
creativity
entertainment

due in 24 hours from urcheck in.. consider this my check in

if u decide to change or add anything to these rules post it with ur check in

[NoVeL]

Check!

- NoVeL

-- Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:13 pm --

iight here's my post!

Please picture phenominal phonics PAINTED.
I'm perversed plus problematically PASTED,
Progressive in every payment as far as I PROCLAIM IT!

Muchacho, I perceive 2 believe were both ARTISTS.
But adheed please, foreigners make precise TARGETS.

2 Past this border your gonna NEED,
More than FAKE I.D's & phony passports
2 PROCEED through immigration.

NoVeL's a KNOWN NUISANCE & neuters newly,
BLOWN BLUEPRINTS.
Muchacho My knowledgable kicks 2 the DOME,
sass ur senses more than SHOW SHOEPRINTS.

I spuradically rape records while you rip off RAPISTS.
My lyrics will smack the text out your mouth,
DETERMININ' YOU TASTELESS!!

Fix that crooked smile or better catch a FACELIFT!!!
A dozen dubious defeats doesn't go down as the BASICS.

IIGHT WHERE THE PUNCHLINES GO??

You fuckin' wit a rapper wit the wrong ADDITUDE.
I been read you,
Without LONGITUDE & LADDITUTE.
Handle you? I'll do more & DAMAGE YOU
You'lle get ass fucked in lyrics,
Can't say no homo 2 FAGGOT DUDES!!
Like that aint true & you like "HOW'D HE KNOW?"
Simple, I spit but you cough off Blown REEFAH SMOKE.
He's a JOKE, a comedian like his speeches are UPSTAGED,
It could be the source magazine,
Guarenteed his rhymes won't even make the FRONT PAGE.
Muchacho feliz navidad!!
Cause its a gift 2 know,
how your green thumb lyrics just got BLAZED!

- NoVeL

[Ambiguous Realm]

lol i just noticed u dropped, and wth i said 5 bars lol i'll get to this in a minute

-- Mon Apr 27, 2009 2:45 am --

this nuisance novel is known? ha not even as a name brand bottled cologne,
u wobble alone, cuz u too chicken for beef that's y u gobble the bone,

kid stand aside..i might accidently kill u while my hands are tied,
novel my greatest fan alive, but when it comes to counting bars u can't even manage 5,

u don't know how seven figures look, ya not a best seller so notice this-cover(discover) land,
u straight out of a picture book, see he lost advantages so i must've broken his upper hand,

u washed-out surfaces u got a thing for pale necks, see-man.. it's already ur dream to sail decks,
u mine as well just plead for male flesh...from the simple fact that u need some anal sex,

listen close, the system knows ur a distant foe like criminals in prison clothes, plus as additional..i'll mathematically assort u with the pigeonhole principles,
these lines consist of flows invincible,as a NOVEL ur life story's fictional, not to mention predictable, see ur less original than traditional christian folks

[NoVeL]

let's get sum feedback & votes into this battle..

- NoVeL

[Lady Luck]

punches:Muchacho Man
flow:novel
rhymescheme(multies):Muchacho Man
wordplay:Muchacho Man
nameplay:Muchacho Man
personals:novel
complexity:Muchacho Man
creativity:Muchacho Man
entertainment:novel
I am going with Muchacho Man

[Ambiguous Realm]

appreciate the vote, uppin

[Teflon]

Pretty one sided battle here guys Novel you coulda dropped another 5 bars on top of all the bars you dropped still wouldn't of really stod a chance (no offense) not trying to be a dic just honest..

Anyways...

punches= Much
flow=Novel
rhymescheme(multies)= Much
wordplay= Much
nameplay= Much
personals= Much
complexity= Much
creativity= Much
entertainment= Much

Keep working Novel you'll get there had decent ideas just not put together too hard hitting..

Much-
this nuisance novel is known? ha not even as a name brand bottled cologne,
u wobble alone, cuz u too chicken for beef that's y u gobble the bone,

kid stand aside..i might accidently kill u while my hands are tied,
novel my greatest fan alive, but when it comes to counting bars u can't even manage 5,


*That did it for me man solid verse*

[Ambiguous Realm]

2-0 uppin to close this

[Haz]

punches - Ekoms
flow - Both
rhymescheme(multies)- Ekoms
wordplay - Ekoms .. Even Though Alot Was Forced
nameplay- Both Had Weak Attempts
personals - both ( Tried To Use Names
complexity - Ekoms
creativity - Novel
entertainment - Novel ( Ekom's Was More Boring Then Novel Lmao)

Ekom's Basically Cat Sweeped This Battle..

3-0

[Ambiguous Realm]

good battle novel

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