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...Text1..Basic...Stuff...

My Plan Iz To Raise Wit Triggerz And Disfigure visions Through That Silent Scope//..I Will Leave You Bagged And Tagged Like A Bag Of Dope//..Better Tag Ya Toe Cause You Just Dont Know How Deep My Weaponz Will Go..

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Jet Turbine Enginez Turn Gasoline Through The Hoses That Fuel Oil Through This War Machine//..You Had Better Quarantine My Green Toxic Chemical Dripping Nitroglycerin Evil Stricken Tounge//..I'll Stick You Wit A Heater To Melt That Ice You Pick Iv Got Cold Stabz Like An Ice Pick//I Pack Gunz In To A Army BackPack I Stay Strapped Wit Tankz Like Astronauts Invading The Quartz Of Da Counter Clock Work Conspiracy Evading The Moon Silently Quite Literally//..The Invincible Ability Iz Growin A <Monster> To Form A Beastly Deformed Will Inside Ov-Me..//

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Why The fuck You Squintin You Tryin To Shoot That cAMera Before It Snapshotz Your Hamburger Head??
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Dood .. Calm Your Bar Length Down
They Were Real Stretched , Plus U Could Use More Inner's Or Somethin
To Keep Your Rhyme Scheme Visible..

This Was Straight,
When You Try Real Hard To Come Complex you Honestly Just Come Forced To Others...


But This Was Straight Yo ...
I'd Like To See More ... 6/10..
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Post by мєтαρнуѕιкz »

aww man true fanx 4 da Review man apprecaite it staii up Homie
Why The fuck You Squintin You Tryin To Shoot That cAMera Before It Snapshotz Your Hamburger Head??
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