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this'll be my last drop before the mixxtape is set for download..
plus i'm goin to belize florida and mexico next week so i wont
be online for like 2 weeks or so..1

beat Timbaland..(obviously)

Hook: Tre Tru and Petrafyne

1st verse-Petrafyne

2nd verse-Tre Tru

i'm sure some wont like it..if you dont please leave me feed about
why..technically this song should hit a certain group type ..
hear it through please...

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first thing that hit me is the production is really professional, track sounds good..i know you didnt produce the beat but the lyrics are layed down nicely..

i should probably say i really dont like much hip hop! the stuff i do like is mainly pre 2000 US and a lot of UK artists like jehst, taskforce and foreign beggars..too many whack rap artists around turns me off..im a drum and bass man! :) plus im not really one who feels tunes about banging girls so im not gonna go 'woah' at anything..

hook sounds good..loving the way you two ride it together sounds pretty sick

both verses flowed alright..yours was better and was pretty good in places

head of the class line was sick

everything from the teachers desk line to the valedictorian shit was niceness..flowed really nicely as well

didnt feel the hasslehoff line man!! sounded a lil played for my liking maybe flipped differently it might sound better..

overall i didnt feel the content..but thats just down to my taste, you guys did a pretty good job on it..the beats a little repetitive, well a lot actually..but its not yours so! Do you make any of your own beats? i play around on cuebase and reason but not hip hop!!

peace
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yeah mad respect for the feed..we do make our own beat's ..our original compilation CD is all originals made by Tre Tru or Petrafyne..

check out .. http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/first ... 11676.html
to hear somethin with an original beat..

we make most our good beats off the reason 3 and 4.0..haha we also use cubase to record..this shyt wa for our mixxxtape though...

it's a hit or miss with this one in the underground forum..but i got
a feelin we'll be performin this song alot..haha

N E WAY uppin for more feed..
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yeah i checked it..sounds cool..but why you gotta base the hook around a line from biggie?!!

if you dont mind i got a freestyle battle up with k killah would be good to get some feed and a vote if you got a sec..
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Logic wrote:yeah i checked it..sounds cool..but why you gotta base the hook around a line from biggie?!!

if you dont mind i got a freestyle battle up with k killah would be good to get some feed and a vote if you got a sec..
^^^haha...you know what..that's unnecessary..i based it off that concept .
but when da did biggie say that?...naw kid if you wanna say i used that reference..i gotta credit...N.W.A. that's where i heard it..I believe it was Ice Cube who actually said it in the song Dopeman..and that was way before Biggz..or scarface...it's also a saying that we used around our block from when i was a young G...that's why i used it...that's what we talk about..and how we speak....I'm from the NEXT COAST..as far west as you can get and still be in the U.S. ..i guess biggie musta bit it too now that i'm mentioning it.haha..

thanks 4 the feed though..and i'll ret..the favor..1
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Logic wrote:yeah i checked it..sounds cool..but why you gotta base the hook around a line from biggie?!!

if you dont mind i got a freestyle battle up with k killah would be good to get some feed and a vote if you got a sec..
Apparently Doesn't Know What This Song Is About, Prolly Didn't Even Listen To It.
I Don't Remember Biggie Sayin Anything Bout The Sauce.
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Post by Logic »

hahaa..

Petrafyne..before you get all excited..i wasnt referring to this track..my feed on this track is the first post..i actually checked a second track Tre showed me..so check what context i say something in before you assume yeah?

Tre - thats a fair point..and there wasnt really much point getting defensive about it..im from the UK so we dont talk like that..and that phrase is famous because of Biggies tune Ten Crack Commandments..like it or not, that may not be how it is over there, but thats how it is here, and im giving you feed from my perspective, as an honest listener!

and if your still up for returning the favour check my battle with Quix once its up and weve dropped our verses..im plannin to destroy the fucker!
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Oh You Must Be Talkin Bout First Rule, It Crossed My Mind...You Should Have Mentioned That Yeah?...And Nothin Excites Me Unless It's Got Ass, Tittys, An Two Ice Cold Forty's In Each Hand...Your Two Forty's Short Of Exciting.
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lol..pointless internet beef..blahhhh
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Nice Come Back....Now I Have Nothing To Do For The Rest Of The Day...Thanks......Faggot
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^^^
alright guys...now back to the issue ..some Honest feed
about THIS song please...TY...uppin 8) :construction

logic said:
like it or not, that may not be how it is over there, but thats how it is here, and im giving you feed from my perspective, as an honest listener!

^^^
naw i appreciate all feed mos def..but U should've put that feed on that song, or people could get confused as to which song your talkin about..
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This Song is dope Tre and PFyne
nice stuff
so keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Hey Haz...Shut The Fuck Up!
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