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Nightmare Recreation my 2nd mixtape

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Nightmare Recreation my 2nd mixtape

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well i listened to the first 2 songs..and from what i heard
you need some work on ya delivery, mic presence is decent
and you juggle ya flos a lil bit...

lyricism is decent but can be upped too...
this is ya second mixxtape already?
takin more time to adjust the tracks might help..
but since you already put the album out juss
work on that for your next albumm..

you can clik one of my tracks in my sig to return feed..and
next time try picking your favorite cut from the albumm
and just drop that piece..it'll help with the feed..peace..
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