"battle prayer"

[Lotus]

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jus some experimentin wit drums n shit... kept it pretty simple, really not alot of effect use. wanted to keep this one clean so it wouldnt conflict wit the drums n snares

[TreTru]

uhh it's kinda rockish..IMO hmmm..sounds like some african ass drums though..lol.so must be rippable..LMAO..uhh that that guitar or what
ever sound takes it to a tchno place i guess....it's a pretty full
beat so ...i guess it's aight ..

[Lotus]

yeajust got my keyboard back n was fuckin around wit it til i made this. its rele made more for singing than rappin. my boy can play a mean guitar solo over this too

[PIRATEPRODUCTIONS]

yea it reminded me abit of the blood diamond soundtrack at 1st glance, this iz kool i can see a rapper getn on this and flowin smooth str8 out

i think maybe it was missing a build up of drum presence and a bounce back into the quiet part makin the melody really sink in after , its nicely mastered too u can blast it in tha stereo but it kind of takes away the edge when it starts playing so quietly from another angle of impression from its initial presentation, its just like a pac mixtape i got in my tape deck that way tho

[Lotus]

yea it reminded me abit of the blood diamond soundtrack at 1st glance, this iz kool i can see a rapper getn on this and flowin smooth str8 out

i think maybe it was missing a build up of drum presence and a bounce back into the quiet part makin the melody really sink in after , its nicely mastered too u can blast it in tha stereo but it kind of takes away the edge when it starts playing so quietly from another angle of impression from its initial presentation, its just like a pac mixtape i got in my tape deck that way tho

yeah i know wat ya sayin too i did alot of experimentin wit this to try out dif effects n buildups but i jus decided to leave it as is n sleep on it for l8r on when im better at this shit.