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Post by Arvincible »


Fukk dis bich Arvincibal mann he gots me alwase lyin
bout da fakt i love his nutts like the dick dat stay by em
Imma sey abuncha shit about dood...mann am i the winner yet?
Did I becum da one dat make dood look bad on the internet?
I hate da things he seys, i hated when his verses ate me
I hate the family clip on youtube that just humiliyates me
I use 2 beef wid complexity, used 2 pretend I hated Rell
I really love beef dood cuz pork wud send me strait to hell
:) Dats wat Allah said, so I beef lyk its religen
I have to rite a diss on doods becuz im on a mission
I wanna have da most posts 2 i love 2 impress plex
My dream is 2 go 2 his howse n give him da best sex
Now bak to Arv dood, in da last battle he slauddered us
I wish he cud rape me evry nite just like mah father does
He dusent talk 2 me a lot thats why i call him out
Last time he replied my comments, my 2 inch dick wuz falling out
Deres even cee4, hkx, ekoms, ko n kurse mann its so ecciting!
SO meny guys in all directions motivait me to keep writing!
Dis beefing is so awesum, doods give me an erektshon,
Ill never leeve! Thank You IllestLyrics!! For giving me attenshun!!
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Post by Kurse »

Not a bad attack.
I like the approach...instead of a straight forward diss or a subliminal diss...
...it's a first person perspective diss from the victim's point of view.
Which honestly we don't see enough disses like this...atleast not in text.

Noticed the mispelling of words and improper grammer as being a shot at Haz's intelligence as well. (sure he won't appreciate that lol)
But when it's war...some weapons are more effective than others.

But it is Haz. So expect a response. That's pretty much a give in. Somebody is gonna body somebody at some point here...so we'll see how it draws out.
You guys might as well battle and get it over with.
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We Just Battled N i K.O'D Him LoL
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