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yo trust me wen i free
i get lucky
wen i flow never get rusty
must we have an intro
me spittin tempo
while i take hits on endo
to the ground where i send foes
wit my mind to the spoon i bend yo
im back at it like crack addicts
with an automatic static
as i get eratic in the top brackets
my tactics are insane match it
wuts ya age.. act it
u need to practice
i know like an almanac or atlas
that ur soft like ur matress
my style can mix i call it brakish
the tools a ratchet
but it didnt come in a Black&Decker package
i mack it like dirty cops
drop ur pants and jacket
i dont pull it
i just throw ya clothes
over the edge like Bullet
im a thinking catastrophe
after me.. mathematically
it will be about three years
before you ever think drastically
im a masterpiece gettin dirty
like a Pasture's knees
i need food for my mind.. is the nine
and im no talkin bullshit
man a verse from me is a full clip
i got a mean sixteen
equally to the Sistine Chapel
cuz im the Van Gogh
of this damn show.. supposively
well.. ima show these dudes
how its supposed to be
the only people safe
are the people sittin close to me
cuz im spittin like a cobra
with a black mamba potency
wen u look up from the ropes n see..
i messed u up mentally
like dopamine.. n you kno its me
the you can devise
wut it means to have floetry
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Post by Haz »

im back at it like crack addicts
with an automatic static
as i get eratic in the top brackets
my tactics are insane match it
wuts ya age.. act it
u need to practice
i know like an almanac or atlas
that ur soft like ur matress
my style can mix i call it brakish
the tools a ratchet
but it didnt come in a Black&Decker package
i mack it like dirty cops
drop ur pants and jacket


BANANAZ!...... I Heard U Kick This Shit To Me Son.. The Flow Was Fuckin On Point Like....

Ya Flow Deff Go's Hard Son.. Deff Go's Hard....
I Liked The Rhyme Scheme Of That Shit I Pointed Out.. Keep Droppin Family...

And Yo!.. Some1 On Here Who Never Heard Me Before Said I Cant Freestyle LMAOOO
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Post by Philosopher Stone »

hahaha... u cant free....? thats funny i donno whoever said it but id like to here a phone call battle or somethin....

good looks yo
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Post by eMCee Havic »

yeah i like this piece it reminds me of freestylin
a lot of people dont get the short lines, but i do.
its really how people flow.

nice peice


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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

i'ma pretty much agree with hazard.. that part was the sickest to me..how well the flow was going and rhyme scheme etc...pretty good piece...
entertaining... had some okay punches..cool concepts..keep at it bro
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good looks..
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yeah man this flow was pretty sick dude... makes it an easier read to keep ya lines short... good job man n welcome to Illest
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good looks brotha man
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yw brutha mon
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Post by Tempest »

Very tightly woven flow, easy to tell you just typed it up like a freestyle because there were some choppy parts at the start (like most freestyles) but once you gained some momentum and found your groove it flowed very smoothly throughout. The structure and rhymescheme were unorthadox, but still good to read. You have skills so let's see you drop something with a little more thought behind it next time, to see what you're really capable of. Keep goin at it.
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Post by The Gonz »

Real smoov, jive turkey. Molasses flow.
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