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Going 187 on A BiTCH

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Going 187 on A BiTCH

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this is one of my audio battles i recorded like 4 days ago
i lost this battle due to dick riding and shit .... its all good
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

You Sound Like A Young LiL Wayne LMAO

Alright diss...shoulda came with more creativity...good flow
Stop Saying "Ohh, And Damn" In the background...especially if the punch isn't really effective
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LoL Fuck That shit....anways i was just doing it for the fuck of it...
Thanx for that feed thou
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Post by Viral »

this was aight for a diss..it coulda been alot harder...ur flow seemed choppy...the beat was dope...lol...keep doin u man
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Post by ..Ovher-Dose.. »

u didnt lose to DR'in.. u lost cuzz ur got pumbled..
..dude forreal.. u talk SOO much..
not to mention ur whole verse was built around fake personals..
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Post by HKX »

Dis diss wat aight dawg could've come harder on it tho it was decent not wat i expected keep droppin kid
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Post by Kurse »

This wasn't really a hard-hittin diss.
If you would've won that battle, then it had to be becuz the other guy dropped sum hot-ass garbage! I dunno.
Not sayin it as an insult either...
...just sayin that there had to have been stronger ways to get at this guy.
Also your ad-libs were way too loud.
If you're going to talk shit and laugh and shit like that..
..then make it real subtle in the background.
You don't want that kinda shit over powering your primary vocals.
Plus you should've used a better beat...this one was played out long ago. I think that's also what might've hurt this diss.
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