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I thought you were my best friend
I felt we'd be together 'til the end
You're not the girl I once knew
Tell me where she is 'cause she's not you

You used to be that shoulder
That shoulder I could lean on through it all
But now it's getting colder
There's no love between these walls

Jealousy, jealousy, jealousy
It's such an evil thing to watch someone have
Jealousy, jealousy, jealousy
Nobody wins when you're full of envy

La, la, la, la, la, la
La, la, la, la, la, la, la, la, la, la

I was always happy
When I was watchin' you become a star
But you were only happy
When the world was openin' up my scars

And now I'm like the devil
Well if I am, then what does that make you?
You sold yourself your own fame
You'd still never walk a day in my shoes

Jealousy, jealousy, jealousy
It's such a thing to watch someone
Jealousy, jealousy, jealousy
Nobody wins when you're full of envy

La, la, la, la, la, la
La, la, la, la, la, la, la, la, la, la
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Nice. I wish I could hear the emotion behind this.
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Post by complexity »

thanks for the feedback, i spent a lot of time copying this paris hilton verse, damn
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Lmao
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hahahahaha invincible complemented a paris hilton track
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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omg lmao nice one....
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Yeah it's nice. Too bad she isn't actually singing it. I haven't heard the cd but I heard it isn't her. Can she even take credit for writing it?
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Post by complexity »

Well. She possibly had a ghost writer. Even if they would dumb down the lyrics to feed her needs. Also she does sing. They just use some new technology to stretch her vocals and shit. Maybe someone can elaborate more on it.
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Post by drunken jesus »

Its her singing, with enough layers engineers can make even the most mediocre singers sound decent

Most of the newer popular r&b/club female singers can't sing at all live but with enough layers and effects engineers make their singing sound better

And yeah she most likely wrote nothing on her album, which is pathetic cause the lyrics on it aren't nothing worth paying for
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Mac »

I'd Have To Agree With Jesus. But I Unno Why She'd Have A Ghost Writer, Either Way It's Not Worth Paying For Rather It's Her Own Material, Or Somebody Elses..But That's Comin From Somebody Who Claims She's The Founder Of "That's Hot"? Lol I Think That's The Saying..haha..Shit's Garbage.
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I'd Have To Agree With Jesus. But I Unno Why She'd Have A Ghost Writer, Either Way It's Not Worth Paying For Rather It's Her Own Material, Or Somebody Elses..But That's Comin From Somebody Who Claims She's The Founder Of "That's Hot"? Lol I Think That's The Saying..haha..Shit's Garbage.
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Post by complexity »

Three six mafia wrote a lot of songs. She is a fucking moron. Honestly if you don't know how stupid Paris Hilton is look it up. Its the most entertaining shit
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Word..

An My Bad About Posting Twice Like A Broken CD, My Browser Was Bein Homo..Baha
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Don't blame your internet browser on this one.
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Post by Mac »

Some People Shit Think For They Type, like why Would I Type The Same Exact Thing Twice...People Are Ignorant..lol
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