Da Guy Vs Symbolikull(Symbolikull)

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Da Guy Vs Symbolikull(Symbolikull)

Post by 16 Micz »

House Rules
we're switching it up a bit, your gonna have 3 topics to choose from..you must stick strictly to the topics, dissing the other emcee is not allowed this round..
Your topics are:
1.lost in the jungle
2.Dysfunctional Family
3.A hitman's assignment




Topics get more difficult as you advance, good luck hope you like the topics, if you dont oh well.


8 Bars
16 Lines
4 Days Limit
Last edited by 16 Micz on Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:30 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

checkin in-

so are pickin from those 3?
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by 16 Micz »

yes ma'am
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check
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my assignment ta take ya life man knife- in- hand or snipe -from -spans//
squeeze ya livelihood like quick restrictive sand wit lives -in -hands//

contract killer n dope mc call me the "hit" "man"//
attack ya wit rope in ya sleep strung up the shit hit the fan//

slit ya throat wit razor wire n shave ya vocal chords//
split through haze n fire i sparked n made ya grave the smokin floorboards//

murder ya execution style center- mass- to- the- chest//
close range to watch ya pulse change the gauge enter-fast-through-ya-vest//

creep through the shadows ta work ya n like "ghost" b gone//
invisible man this shallow murk cant be seen like a "ghost" recon//

aint personal its business i was chose ta dispell hope//
wit an anonymous post 50 large n a pic of ghost in an envelope//

AKA suit n tie GUY like men- in- black ill erase- ya- mind//
a fuckin wise guy strike a pen -in -ya- back wit gloves leave no trace- in- spines//

my tongues a hollow point DA GUY eats pussies like kev-lar//
"grimreaper" "mc" bars assassinate retards like im a "death" -"star"//
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

why you usin my name...this is a no dissin tourny

but it was a nice verse
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I didnt diss you in this its name play n your my opponent
thx for the feed uppin yours
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damn i forgot it was 8 bars....lol my bad
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When I Get the Note, Ima Evict yuh Hope when I come up quick to Slit yuh Throat,
Bodies left Thickly Soaked, missin yuh teeth, Im Slick and Cloak to leave Victims Ghost,

Ima beast Ill decease you wit My Bare Hands, witta grip like a vise leave yuh pipes tight Like Bear Traps,
Im in the shawdows unseen In Sights Stared At, I'll rip you spiritless jus to show you what yuh Night Mares Lack,

Aimin thru the Scope, Waitin for the Go to find you on the shore Layin in the Coast,
Or Hangin from Ropes, Chained to a Pole, wit Brains on yuh Toes, there aint no Savin yuh Soul,

Twistin yuh Neck, Ina Affect, Hittin yuh witta Different Aspect, of a blade in a Liftin Effect,
Startin at the gut, Slittin a Set of cuts from yuh Ribs to yuh Chest, Ive christened the Kissin of Death,

You better Pray to the Heavens, when Im Sprayin that Weapon, Im the crypt keeper Changin yuh Message,
This Razors yuh Death Wish, Shavin Intestines, finding a new Place to Inject yuh Veins wit Infections,

I Stalk my Pray, and wait for you to Walk my Way, then use a gun assault to leave you Mulled and Slayed,
Left to rot ina bathroom Stall for Days, wait till yuh family has yuh burial and come back to Haunt yuh Grave,

What my clients want, my Clients Get, Silent and a Quit Hit, or Violence witta Spinal Drip,
I know the exact Science to Slice a Wrist, plus Ima business man so I know the Price to Pick,

Millions? Will change my Feelins, Thousands? I'll run up in yuh Buildin, Im steady Killin like a Villian,
Hundreds Ill snatch the Children, None of yuh Kin Wins, there aint nothing a Hit Man aint Skilled In,
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

when does the votin commence
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Post by 8th »

this was a pretty good battle.

Da Guy:

murder ya execution style center- mass- to- the- chest//
close range to watch ya pulse change the gauge enter-fast-through-ya-vest//

creep through the shadows ta work ya n like "ghost" b gone//
invisible man this shallow murk cant be seen like a "ghost" recon//

^prolly the best lines. Over all it was a pretty good verse. You used an OK amount of multis, although i few more wouldnt help. You stuck to the topic kinda. You more talked about what you would do rather then an assignment. But overall a pretty good verse.


Ghost:

Ima beast Ill decease you wit My Bare Hands, witta grip like a vise leave yuh pipes tight Like Bear Traps,
Im in the shawdows unseen In Sights Stared At, I'll rip you spiritless jus to show you what yuh Night Mares Lack,

You better Pray to the Heavens, when Im Sprayin that Weapon, Im the crypt keeper Changin yuh Message,
This Razors yuh Death Wish, Shavin Intestines, finding a new Place to Inject yuh Veins wit Infections,

^fav. lines. It was all fire though man. You also kinda were on topic. you kinda also talked about what you would do rather then an assignment. Multis crazy as usual. I think your line length is too long, but if you can actually spit that to a beat then its whatever. overall, fire verse.


vote: ghost Yall both had good verses, both were kinda off topic a little, but ghosts was just overall better.

good battle & stay up
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

This was definatley a good battle...Alot of intresting shit to read lol

My vote goes to ghost because...I think he stayed on topic better, had a better flow and his verse was more lyrical. He stayed to the topic the best and elaborated on it. He was more creative with his verse and I think was overall just better in this battle.

What my clients want, my Clients Get, Silent and a Quit Hit, or Violence witta Spinal Drip,
I know the exact Science to Slice a Wrist, plus Ima business man so I know the Price to Pick,

Millions? Will change my Feelins, Thousands? I'll run up in yuh Buildin, Im steady Killin like a Villian,
Hundreds Ill snatch the Children, None of yuh Kin Wins, there aint nothing a Hit Man aint Skilled In

^^ fav bars by ghost

Da_Guy you have elevated alot and it shows in your writings now, this was a good verse from you and you did a good job with your content. You were creative and stayed to the topic for the most part but Ghost just came harder...but good job keep @ it


creep through the shadows ta work ya n like "ghost" b gone//
invisible man this shallow murk cant be seen like a "ghost" recon//

aint personal its business i was chose ta dispell hope//
wit an anonymous post 50 large n a pic of ghost in an envelope//

AKA suit n tie GUY like men- in- black ill erase- ya- mind//
a fuckin wise guy strike a pen -in -ya- back wit gloves leave no trace- in- spines//

^^ parts that stuck out for me on your verse

Good battle boys
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

2-0 uppin you fools
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for the votes you 2, and yeah Da Guy you have mos def improved here, ALOT!!! its nice to see elevation.
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Post by RH1NO »

appreciate the feed from both good battle 0-2 uppin
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