A Glowing Waterfall

[DJNellee303]

I live with a philosophy that tomorrow will be better
But sometimes that doesn't happen
In fact usually it isn't
I try to do what I can but usually it isn't enough
Spinning me further into my cyclone
Of my debris and self filth
Just getting dizzy in my complete deficit of motivation
Finding it harder to see my once crystal clear aspirations.
There's no simile or metaphor. No consonance or alliteration
To compare my life and trials to in this moment of annihilation
No light gets brighter in here but all I can do is keep hopin
That tomorrow will be better and I can continue to breathe
What else can I do? So I just keep on goin
Cant let em know that I'm hurtin so I hide the tears in my sleeve
Just try and convince my self that I really still believe
All the things they told me but I can still see
Myself just like the others with no meaning in my life
It got lost along the path of sticks, stones and strife
Cuz I was supposed to be the hope the one who had it right
But I only find myself alive in the deep sin of night
Hording all the ignorance and laziness in my universe
Wondering when I'll find my old self and get my life to work
Cuz I've been wandering around in the tub without the water running
But soon there'll be a waterfall glowing, full and stunning
Gushing and flowing to clear a path where I can be alive
Ripping through the dead of the night with the help of the moon
Horus and Set will have a final battle and light will prevail
And in the end I'll have a story to tell
About my life and how the water just might have saved me from hell

[FlipSide]

Just getting dizzy in my complete deficit of motivation
Finding it harder to see my once crystal clear aspirations.
There's no simile or metaphor. No consonance or alliteration
To compare my life and trials to in this moment of annihilation

This Is What The Fuck Im Talking About Right Here.... I Coulve Started This Quote B4 But This Stands Out To Me

Cant let em know that I'm hurtin so I hide the tears in my sleeve
Just try and convince my self that I really still believe

Dope As Well

It got lost along the path of sticks, stones and strife
Cuz I was supposed to be the hope the one who had it right
But I only find myself alive in the deep sin of night

i can Really Relate To This Set Right Here Bro

This Piece If Def Deep... Nice Drop Man...

[QwarterZ]

This piece is dope as hell man, the vibe
the realness of each word, really makes it stand out

No light gets brighter in here but all I can do is keep hopin
That tomorrow will be better and I can continue to breathe
What else can I do? So I just keep on goin
Cant let em know that I'm hurtin so I hide the tears in my sleeve
Just try and convince my self that I really still believe

this part really appeals to me, cuz I can relate
you really got a way with words my dude no lie
keep writing and I'll peep more of your work, no doubt!