The Peace of Night

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Audible Thought
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The Peace of Night

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It is....
4 o'clock in the morning
nothing in sight but silhouttes in a dim light
....
you see i love the night
it brings me peace knowing no one is awake
no one to judge my face or the path i take by sitting here
in the dark with a cigarette lit ashes falling in a glass
where my last drink had been as the time passes slow...
i hear nothing but the ticks and tocks and my heart beatin
at sixty seven beats a minute
in an infinite darkness if heaven is real... im in it
...
cuz you see the darkness swallows all matter
my room is small yet vast when light doesnt scatter across the walls
i can paint pictures without closing my eyes at all
an empty universe for me to explore if i open the door
theres noone in sight... as if im god in the night
ready to bring the light... but not yet...
let me finish my cigarette and take some steps
across the world as if im the only one on it
for once... do everything the way i wanted
Theres peace to be found in the night... its not the time of evil
But it will be destroyed if i tell all the other people



I wrote this couple months ago at 4 in the morning after a shroom trip, kind of random 0_0
"Until we're all free fuck the world pass the weed, life ain't what it seems y'all we chasin fantasies"-Lastchild [R.I.P]
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Re: The Peace of Night

Post by Deciple »

kinda just gives you the picture of some1 just sitting at a computer in like a HUGE empty room with a spot light and then a HUGE giant clock that covers the whole wall.. its pretty tight.. i do like this
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Philippians 4:13
I can do everything through him who gives me strength.

Psalms 23:4
Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for you are with me; your rod and your staff, they comfort me.
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Re: The Peace of Night

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I've felt the same way after a shroom trip. I enjoyed this a lot.

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