I like this my son. Very emotional and self reflective. I am stoked to see the new poems poppin up from you keep em comin man they get better and better. Good poem playa.
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Un Cuento Antes De Dormir.
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I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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It shows who u are...or ur depiction of the person of the story paints the picture well... I really like that u going marianas trench on this lil part of the forum..I Enjoy reading moving drops like this...cuz in ways i can relate... Sorry for sleepin on this for so long..it is a dope dropMy playground was dirt/
Or the angered part of the trailer park/
I wanted to look back…/
And have a good laugh…/ but it still breaks my heart/
I was a cub…/ a premature artist/
Just a kid following the noise down the tunnel/
I was in love…/ now I know what art is/
It’s communication for the boy in the bubble/
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