Hot Plate!! ( Written 2 My Fiancee )

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Hot Plate!! ( Written 2 My Fiancee )

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Damn baby, I'm missin you greatly & that's a given.
Here's some food for thought, we waz lovin in the kitchen
booty smooth like gravy & its your cookin i've been missin.

Its iight how you prepare that rice..
but I LOVE YOUR PEPPERED STEAK & its all a pipe dream
because my water still doesnt taste that nice.

Im here baby butta beans,
skin lookin like some butta pecan ice cream.
Its a nice thing
Like your vagina cake & I stay lickin off your icing.

Your shocking baby cuz when you cumm its a downpour
& flashin lightning as you be moanin for more.
Its not easy, I just cant go 2 the store...
Its like your the beef & Im outside roamin for pork!!

You minus well say my love aint real & go look for a whore
but I wont instead imma look 4 yah door
& like busta rhymes baby gimme some more!!
Your my hot plate baby dont drop my food on the floor!

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This was Interesting ...
If You Want To Make Her Melt..
Do Some Shit That'll Get Her Real Emotional..
But Not for Nothing This Was Decent..
Could Tighten A Few Spots..
Imagery Was There...

Just Keep At It Man .. Good Luck
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Lol u Can Tell Someone's Never Had The Pink Clam When They Say Shit Like 'Vagina Cake'.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.

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haha.

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I'm pretty sure if Mister wrote me something like that, I'd die laughing. But, it rhymes, so good job i guess.

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damn baby boy that shit got my kitty cat purring got milk ? :lol:

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Domino wrote:Lol u Can Tell Someone's Never Had The Pink Clam When They Say Shit Like 'Vagina Cake'.
lmfao
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Lady Luck... WTF is that? haha omg that is the first time I have ever heard anything like that... ROFL at Pink Clam
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decent,ended it pretty nice

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