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J-Majikk
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Post by J-Majikk »

aight my flow to me is unique. i mean i write about shit most 17 yr olds dont dream about. and im real wit it. buti know i need a lot of development still. i need yall to tell me what i need to do so that i kan be on yall level ya digg.

i mean yall niggaz are the illest to me. not like the mainstream watered down fake ass cock suckin bitches feel me?. please listen to my stuff. comment on my beats and school me
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i'm happy to help anyone thats wants to elevate
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by i.Eat.Rappers »

Lol i heard ya songs u actually pretty nice. But i would help u but i think ur better then me on the mic so i wouldnt have much to teach u though lol.
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u may not no as much but u may know sumin that he does not so it might not matter
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Mass Effex »

I couldn't help you cause I ain't all that great compared to these other guys, but I can tell you to STAY REAL.
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Just Holla At Me B...
When u Need some help Let me Know..
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