Song i wrote to Phasewons beat

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Song i wrote to Phasewons beat

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This is an old piece but fuck it. Never got to record it it...




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God forgive me and have pity for the sins I commit/
My mind's been taken by Satan so I have to admit/
I still love her but want her dead, am I actually sick?/
No reason for breathing no more I'm as mad as it gets..but..
1st:
I try to be diligent whenever living my life/
But you had to step on my heart, and now I'm feeling demise/
But yet ur still on my mind, I'm waiting for the pain to be over/
And I'm just killing some tiiime, cuz I hate to be sober/
Now I'm snorting sedatives as medicines just making me colder/
I can't seem to get a grip anymore, somethings taking me over/
Restraining my anguish cause i wanna basically choke her/
I can't reframe from this hatred the weight is breaking my shoulders/

Hook:
God forgive me and have pity for the sins I commit/
My mind's been taken by Satan so I have to admit/
I still love her but want her dead, am I actually sick?/
No reason for breathing no more I'm as mad as it gets..but..
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY

2nd:
I'm leaving my crib and I feel like creeping this early/
She says that she loves me and doesnt have a reason to hurt me/
But I'm feeling the tension and dementia, then starts to set in/
With the same kinda hatred and anger that my heart was left with/
I'm not violent, abusive, but u had to drive me to do it/
You slept with another man and tried to lie for amusement/
It's useless to try and deny, that you never had did it/
No kidding I'll cut and gut em have em severed in minutes/

Hook:
God forgive me and have pity for the sins I commit/
My mind's been taken by Satan so I have to admit/
I still love her but want her dead, am I actually sick?/
No reason for breathing no more I'm as mad as it gets..but..
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY

Verse 3:
I sneak in the bedroom, I'm feeling the rushing of anger/
Take her by the neck and strangle cuz she's been fucking the neighbor/
So I lacerated his features, then I cut her with razors/
Then slit my own fucking veins cuz my lovers a traitor/
She gazed in my eyes as she cried as I tried to cuddle and save her/
But when I glanced up in the mirror, there was no other stranger/
The voices had lied, the demons inside hoping I die/
I kiss her lucious lips a last time before closing my eyes/...goodbye

Hook:
God forgive me and have pity for the sins I commit/
My mind's been taken by Satan so I have to admit/
I still love her but want her dead, am I actually sick?/
No reason for breathing no more I'm as mad as it gets..but..
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
WE ALL DIE ONE DAY
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Re: Song i wrote to Phasewons beat

Post by complexity »

The best part about this piece besides emotion is the fact that you just flow your bars so easily. Crazy you can still do that after all these years.

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But you had to step on my heart, and now I'm feeling demise/
But yet ur still on my mind, I'm waiting for the pain to be over/
And I'm just killing some tiiime, cuz I hate to be sober/
Now I'm snorting sedatives as medicines just making me colder/
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