somethin i was writin up in history class.
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somethin i was writin up in history class.
jus 2 random verses. tell me what ya'll think.
there's something i've been meanin to say
and baby girl i can't keep it inside myself for one more day
see everytime i wake up, you on my mind
i love the way you talk, you walk, the way you smile
i never thought i'd meet a girl like you
sweet ,sassy and beautiful too
i guess its quite true i kinda like you
i feel so weird its like i got the flu
and everytime i see you my heart skips a beat
you got me so in love, my head over my feet
and i never thought i'd be like this all over a girl
sometimes i wish, straight up that you were my girl
you more precious then a million dolla pearl
but i know it just cant be
coz i clearly see
you aint for me
and i hate the thought
of me without you
Copyright River "Ol' Boy Slim" Ibe, 2007
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when she twirled in that mini skirt i knew straight up it was lovin
like my homies say she was truly hotter then an oven
She was the girl of my dreams
It would truly seem that it was all a dream
That she,
only existed to comfort me
Nicest girl i met,nicest girl i knew
It would be pure chance if she would want me too
She would pick me up everytime i fell down
Her voice was a heavenly sound
So beautiful at heart and face
Everytime i'd look at her i'd be truly amazed
Lost in her eyes in a wonderful maze
Copyright River "Ol' Boy Slim" and MC Mitty 2007
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there's something i've been meanin to say
and baby girl i can't keep it inside myself for one more day
see everytime i wake up, you on my mind
i love the way you talk, you walk, the way you smile
i never thought i'd meet a girl like you
sweet ,sassy and beautiful too
i guess its quite true i kinda like you
i feel so weird its like i got the flu
and everytime i see you my heart skips a beat
you got me so in love, my head over my feet
and i never thought i'd be like this all over a girl
sometimes i wish, straight up that you were my girl
you more precious then a million dolla pearl
but i know it just cant be
coz i clearly see
you aint for me
and i hate the thought
of me without you
Copyright River "Ol' Boy Slim" Ibe, 2007
_______________________________________________________________________
when she twirled in that mini skirt i knew straight up it was lovin
like my homies say she was truly hotter then an oven
She was the girl of my dreams
It would truly seem that it was all a dream
That she,
only existed to comfort me
Nicest girl i met,nicest girl i knew
It would be pure chance if she would want me too
She would pick me up everytime i fell down
Her voice was a heavenly sound
So beautiful at heart and face
Everytime i'd look at her i'd be truly amazed
Lost in her eyes in a wonderful maze
Copyright River "Ol' Boy Slim" and MC Mitty 2007
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Yeah it\'s Simple lol. i Donno its More Poetic To Me, The Whole Style Was Not Really Rap But More Poetic. if u Wnna Make it a Good Rap Verse, Fix The Flow And Use More Vocab, And Try To Steer Away From \'Hot as an Oven\' And Shit Like That Cuz it\'s Played lol, Keep Droppin.
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you suck
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
dj ur so blunt hahahadrunken jesus wrote:you suck
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