Demonic Enigma

[Def-init]

Born in escrow as a Scorpio.
A blood addicted Pharaoh.
A psycho's soul, solo in limbo...
A Maestro that affects the very airflow!
Bone marrow on burning meadows...
Standing toe to toe, the salvos tango!
Im the grammatical cannibal
that tastes the sensual,
the lips are weapons!
Piercing javelins.
The light of Gabriel,
an Archangel with the flame of Dragons.

I'll never regain my form as human,
my skin, like Lichens.
I pass the time, roaming alone on islands,
Vampiric homicide, violins reciting Latin!
It aint sin, if you get permission!
I speak in demonic diction.
Practicing Witchcraft,
as a Warlock in the Wicken religion!
Yet, a Banshee's banter asked the questions...
If the Pale-riders, ride. Will the sky blacken?
If boarders collapse, will the devil Harken?
A fork in the road, now my soul's missing,
Wondering and fearing the act of dreaming!
I can feel an aura's rapid-darkening!

Skulls, Goblins, pain and mist!
A dark age contained in Necropolis.
Where this verbal mastery is a battle cry
and like Lucifer...I’m one 'HELL' of a guy!
I can smell the blood of Abraham on the winds of time.
I can see crosses and sacrificial lambs behind the signs!
I'll mix cosmic designs with fine wine.
I'm a sublime mastermind of poetic rhyme.
Only my bloodline and partners in crime,
Outlined shrines and combined thoughts like mine!

Ripened Virgins? An urban Legend!
Would rather search the questions!
Serve in heaven?!?!?!?
Rather join my righteous brethren...
...Right beside the smoldering children.
Should I cry, or try and mention,
the demons I've likely summoned?
Should I rationalize the soul,
even thou the reasons lessened?

Since the baptism and becoming Christened,
I've lived, sinning!
Since the chime of crimson seconds shortened,
I've been dying!
Since I climbed the crib.
I've spent lifetimes lost and rioting!
I'll nail the cross and add...
a pail to catch the blood and piss in!
My visions, if even only slightly weeping.
Diminishes aging and whores the living.

[AntiMaTTer]

interesting piece to say the least. flow would be up and down at times but was really a good read. like the esoteric approach with this topic and it read pretty good i think.

I can see crosses and sacrificial lambs behind the signs!
I'll mix cosmic designs with fine wine.
I'm a sublime mastermind of poetic rhyme.
Only my bloodline and partners in crime,
Outlined shrines and combined thoughts like mine!

best part that i liked in the verse.

[FatalX]

it took me a minute to adjust to reading this style but once I got the gist of it....I really like it....nice vocab and although the rhyming didnt synch up on point for me reading it I could def picture someone spitting it where they altered there voice for it....very cool

-- Mon Dec 19, 2011 3:02 pm --

it took me a minute to adjust to reading this style but once I got the gist of it....I really like it....nice vocab and although the rhyming didnt synch up on point for me reading it I could def picture someone spitting it where they altered there voice for it....very cool

[Def-init]

Thx for the feed.
I made this in an unorthodox way with a strong emphasis on the poetic vibe.
Nonetheless, I'm glad you enjoyed it all.

[Kau the Lion]

I'm digging the crazy rhyme schemes and nice use of vocab here. The only line I didn't really like was the Hell of a guy pun. Felt a little goofy and out of place compared to the rest of the drop. The flow was smooth all through-out. Some parts felt a little nonsensical but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt that I probably just didn't get what you meant. Overall, a really nice piece getting slept on here.

[Def-init]

I'm digging the crazy rhyme schemes and nice use of vocab here. The only line I didn't really like was the Hell of a guy pun. Felt a little goofy and out of place compared to the rest of the drop.

To be honest man. I almost removed that bar you mentioned.
I was lifted as hell when I wrote this,
so I just concentrated on the flow and Vocab.
Im glad you like it thou and thx for the feed man.

[QwarterZ]

This was pretty cool...the flow was kind of wacky..but the use of your vocab made up for any doubt this was good..this actually seemed like a poetic epic when it started coming across certain angles...made it enjoyable for the most part...nice drop my dude

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[Def-init]

This was pretty cool...the flow was kind of wacky..but the use of your vocab made up for any doubt this was good..this actually seemed like a poetic epic when it started coming across certain angles...made it enjoyable for the most part...nice drop my dude

Im glad you enjoyed it. "Poetic Epic" Was the precise vibe I was going for.
Im also glad it came off that way to the readers... Thx for the feedback man!!