THE NAME IS TAKTIX IM CHILLING WITH BALROG
WE DO NOTHING BUT CHILL AND RHYME CUZ THATS OUR JOB
YOU CANT MESS WITH US YOU WILL GET MOLLYWOMPED*
IM LIKE GODZILLA AND YOUR ABOUT TO BE STOMPED
WE COME WITH THE KILLER BEATS TO LET EM ALL KNOW
IF YOU WANNA STEP UP THEN BEST START A FLOW
LISTEN UP NOW LIL KID AND PLEASE BE SEATED
IMA COMPUTER VIRUS AND YOUR BOUT TO BE DELETED
YOUR GONNA LOSE SO BAD YOUR GONNA BE IN DENIAL
YOU CAN NEVER TOP THIS ITS THAT KILLER STYLE
KEEP RUNNING YOUR MOUTH JOJO BUT DONT TRIP
IMA PULL AN EMINEM MOVE AND FLIP THE SCRIPT
YOUR WEAK YOU WOULDNT BE ABLE TO TAKE MY LINES
THIS WILL TREAT YA LIKE 50 AND HIT YOU 9 TIMES
I CAN KEEP GOING I GOT MORE RHYMES THEN DR SUESS
YOU CAN TRY TO FADE MY KILLER STYLE BUT YOULL LOSE
Chorus
ITS THE KILLER STYLE (WHAT WHAT)
IT WILL DRIVE YOU WILD (YEAH WHAT)
Tell me what you think both positive and negative feed is fine my bro is gonna add another verse to this to make it complete. Pos and Neg feed is great the more the better I get.
*Mollywomped = Beaten up
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"When I come home from work im feening for an 8 ball i got crack on my mind im hearing cocain call telling me to beep the dealer to deliver me stuff keep it a secret from my wife cause she dosnt know i do drugs there i was bleeding from my nose and damn i couldnt breathe but im still thinking bout the next gram"
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yea, i detect some potential here, ya seem to have a good grasp of similies and content,
try to carry your rhymes longer then just 2 lines, and try to link multiple words together with the rhymes
LISTEN UP NOW LIL KID AND PLEASE BE SEATED
IMA COMPUTER VIRUS AND YOUR BOUT TO BE DELETED
^^^ you were on the right track with this bar because you had more than one syllable, but try linkin 2 words together for your rhymes, have a look around the sight and youll see examples of what i mean
try to carry your rhymes longer then just 2 lines, and try to link multiple words together with the rhymes
LISTEN UP NOW LIL KID AND PLEASE BE SEATED
IMA COMPUTER VIRUS AND YOUR BOUT TO BE DELETED
^^^ you were on the right track with this bar because you had more than one syllable, but try linkin 2 words together for your rhymes, have a look around the sight and youll see examples of what i mean
facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Aight thanks ima keep writing some more I will try to get my friends verse on that one thanks for feed
"When I come home from work im feening for an 8 ball i got crack on my mind im hearing cocain call telling me to beep the dealer to deliver me stuff keep it a secret from my wife cause she dosnt know i do drugs there i was bleeding from my nose and damn i couldnt breathe but im still thinking bout the next gram"
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Thanks all I been reading all the flows on this site I can getting ideas on how stuff works or w/e and I write like non stop i actually wrote till my pencil broke rofl but yeah ima keep writing
"When I come home from work im feening for an 8 ball i got crack on my mind im hearing cocain call telling me to beep the dealer to deliver me stuff keep it a secret from my wife cause she dosnt know i do drugs there i was bleeding from my nose and damn i couldnt breathe but im still thinking bout the next gram"
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