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Futuristic Flow

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Just a lil' freeverse, feed is appreciated & returned.

[Phasewon]
Every battle maneuver, will batter and bruise ya
Ask my producer, my tracks'll induce ya with raps from the future
My brain is a massive consumer, I have a cancerous tumor
That can gather more data than a NASA computer
Mathematically school ya, like your calculus tutor
Balance the nuclear mass of two atoms and do the math with a ruler
I threw Newton's Apple into a gravity skewer
Let it travel into the past where Eve and Adam consumed the
Magical fruit 'n had the influence of a satanic recruiter
So don't let Lucifer's super natural tactics seduce ya
I'd massacre Buddha, while challengin' Zeus 'n
Grapplin' Judah, after I win a staring match with Medusa
Catch you in Koopa's Castle and stab your medulla
Then I'm handin' it to ya on the tip of the javelin through ya
I'm castin' the moon into the planet to shatter the lunar
And have the Mayan calendar rumor, happenin' sooner
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Re: Futuristic Flow

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Every battle maneuver, will batter and bruise ya
Ask my producer, my tracks'll induce ya with raps from the future
My brain is a massive consumer, I have a cancerous tumor
That can gather more data than a NASA computer
Mathematically school ya, like your calculus tutor
Balance the nuclear mass of two atoms and do the math with a ruler
I threw Newton's Apple into a gravity skewer
Let it travel into the past where Eve and Adam consumed the
Magical fruit 'n had the influence of a satanic recruiter
So don't let Lucifer's super natural tactics seduce ya
I'd massacre Buddha, while challengin' Zeus 'n
Grapplin' Judah, after I win a staring match with Medusa
Catch you in Koopa's Castle and stab your medulla
Then I'm handin' it to ya on the tip of the javelin through ya
I'm castin' the moon into the planet to shatter the lunar
And have the Mayan calendar rumor, happenin' soon
dope as fuck man PERIOD
THE FINAL SHADE' COMING FALL 2010
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Re: Futuristic Flow

Post by FlipSide »

i read this yesterday...and it was hot...i read it today and it was fire!!... the flows nasty and the metaphoresare stitched in nicely... i would quote some bars but just end up doing what abz did... not a weak part in there to me at all
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Re: Futuristic Flow

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Its like a good version of a run-on sentance

Your flow never stops damnn

8/10

and its good to finally see some more stuff from you man
been a whillee
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Re: Futuristic Flow

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This was sick as hell man.
I'm feeling the flow, it's just so smooth
I'm like damn, where you been?
either way everything you said is so nasty
I mean I really can't fathom anything to say really
the flow is just murderous on here...no doubt
keep writing bruh!
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Re: Futuristic Flow

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'Preciate the feed, yall, been ghost for a minute 'cause cats was stealin' the lyrics, but I'll give it another shot, feed has been returned.
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