Right Back At Cha ..
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Right Back At Cha ..
[align=center]Yall Niggas Got Me real Confused out There..
I'ma Spray This Pest Up Like I'm Using Raid, He'll Be Refusing Aid..
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!
Let The Snoozing Fade.. i'll 'Wake Ya Up" Stuffed In a Caskit Doods Taped Ya Nuts!!
You Pussy & I'm Dirty Something Like The Taste Of Sluts..
I'm Above This Dood Hes Da Ocean..Thats Obsession It Couldnt Be Devotion...
'Ya Styles Week' Like 7 Day "P PROMOTION!!"..
Have you Slayed-Man..Shorten Ya Days Span..Even In July I Bring May Ham...
It's Deadly & Raw..My Mind Holds Macheddi's & Saws That'll Unsteady Ya Jaw..
When I Write I Abuse Da Dope, Friend ya Hyped? Den Lose Ya Hope, End Ya Life i'll USE DA SCOPE..
Your Wack & Can't 'See Complexity Eye To Eye Its Like The Reason U REFUSE TA VOTE!..
This Could BE FATAL, I'ma Put Um 'Unda Flow' Like HE NAVAL, How Could He BE STABLE?
Hes 'Behind In The Box' Like T.V. CABLES
Punch Fa Punch, Aint The Right Phraze...I Turned you To Dust Like Breakin up White Haze...
I At Sight Blaze..It's a Slight Phase..Like Layer Changes On a Nice Day...
You Aint a Champ Or King...i'll Have you Toned Down Like Samples Stringd.. Onto Tracks...
You a Ducka People On To That..Be a Honest Rat..You Wouldnt 'Grip A Tech' Like Omish Cats[/align]
I'ma Spray This Pest Up Like I'm Using Raid, He'll Be Refusing Aid..
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!
Let The Snoozing Fade.. i'll 'Wake Ya Up" Stuffed In a Caskit Doods Taped Ya Nuts!!
You Pussy & I'm Dirty Something Like The Taste Of Sluts..
I'm Above This Dood Hes Da Ocean..Thats Obsession It Couldnt Be Devotion...
'Ya Styles Week' Like 7 Day "P PROMOTION!!"..
Have you Slayed-Man..Shorten Ya Days Span..Even In July I Bring May Ham...
It's Deadly & Raw..My Mind Holds Macheddi's & Saws That'll Unsteady Ya Jaw..
When I Write I Abuse Da Dope, Friend ya Hyped? Den Lose Ya Hope, End Ya Life i'll USE DA SCOPE..
Your Wack & Can't 'See Complexity Eye To Eye Its Like The Reason U REFUSE TA VOTE!..
This Could BE FATAL, I'ma Put Um 'Unda Flow' Like HE NAVAL, How Could He BE STABLE?
Hes 'Behind In The Box' Like T.V. CABLES
Punch Fa Punch, Aint The Right Phraze...I Turned you To Dust Like Breakin up White Haze...
I At Sight Blaze..It's a Slight Phase..Like Layer Changes On a Nice Day...
You Aint a Champ Or King...i'll Have you Toned Down Like Samples Stringd.. Onto Tracks...
You a Ducka People On To That..Be a Honest Rat..You Wouldnt 'Grip A Tech' Like Omish Cats[/align]
I'ma Spray This Pest Up Like I'm Using Raid, He'll Be Refusing Aid..
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!
I like this shyt haha had me laughin..
all in all a pretty good drop.some stuff was a lil forced...of course i seen you do better but looks like this is sumthin you had to get outta your system.... coo mayne keep'em comin.
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!
I like this shyt haha had me laughin..
all in all a pretty good drop.some stuff was a lil forced...of course i seen you do better but looks like this is sumthin you had to get outta your system.... coo mayne keep'em comin.
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^^^
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^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
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Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hgN0MacRqg&feature=fvst[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZ-VXwki ... ature=plcp[/video]
It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla
^^^
Big Island Crypt
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/first ... 11676.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/okay- ... 12393.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tre-t ... 12597.html
http://www.zshare.net/download/6399071566e45a94/
^^Hustle Life Mixx Tape^^
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Ya gettin Bodied qwik chop you up like a saw mill..my Lines are 2 Raw "yeah" i should get my Bars Grilled!!!
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0hgN0MacRqg&feature=fvst[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IZ-VXwki ... ature=plcp[/video]
It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla
haha im glad im the first thing on your mind for the new year.
i`ll give it a quick breakdown since its about me
I'ma Spray This Pest Up Like I'm Using Raid, He'll Be Refusing Aid..
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!
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first line the multis forced. second lines good. arms wordplay is gettin kinda played but it still works
Let The Snoozing Fade.. i'll 'Wake Ya Up" Stuffed In a Caskit Doods Taped Ya Nuts!!
You Pussy & I'm Dirty Something Like The Taste Of Sluts..
^^^^
terrible. "doods taped ya nuts?" dont make sense to me and the dirty like sluts shit is basic as hell
I'm Above This Dood Hes Da Ocean..Thats Obsession It Couldnt Be Devotion...
'Ya Styles Week' Like 7 Day "P PROMOTION!!"..
^^^^
i liked this bar
Have you Slayed-Man..Shorten Ya Days Span..Even In July I Bring May Ham...
^^^^
dont even talk to me about forced shit again lol. may ham? nah its mayhem
It's Deadly & Raw..My Mind Holds Macheddi's & Saws That'll Unsteady Ya Jaw..
^^^^
filler. this bar does nothing to enhance the verse
When I Write I Abuse Da Dope, Friend ya Hyped? Den Lose Ya Hope, End Ya Life i'll USE DA SCOPE..
Your Wack & Can't 'See Complexity Eye To Eye Its Like The Reason U REFUSE TA VOTE!..
^^^^
first lines is just multis with no substance.
second line is so so. i cant see complexity eye to eye? hardly damaging
This Could BE FATAL, I'ma Put Um 'Unda Flow' Like HE NAVAL, How Could He BE STABLE?
Hes 'Behind In The Box' Like T.V. CABLES
^^^^
nice idea but i never knew we were in a box.
Punch Fa Punch, Aint The Right Phraze...I Turned you To Dust Like Breakin up White Haze...
I At Sight Blaze..It's a Slight Phase..Like Layer Changes On a Nice Day...
^^^^
filler. punch never hit at all
You Aint a Champ Or King...i'll Have you Toned Down Like Samples Stringd.. Onto Tracks...
You a Ducka People On To That..Be a Honest Rat..You Wouldnt 'Grip A Tech' Like Omish Cats
^^^^
best bar of your verse. punch was dope although ive heard u use it before in the chatroom
Conclusion
below average verse. again like our battle you had little to no personals. a few decent punches here and there. a bunch of forced shit but at least the flow was good. i think we`ll just leave it at that lyrics wise coz honestly i dont feel this verse requires a response.
i`ll give it a quick breakdown since its about me
I'ma Spray This Pest Up Like I'm Using Raid, He'll Be Refusing Aid..
C Ain Gangsta , i'll "Cut His Arms Out The Picture" Like hes ABUSING BLADES!
^^^^
first line the multis forced. second lines good. arms wordplay is gettin kinda played but it still works
Let The Snoozing Fade.. i'll 'Wake Ya Up" Stuffed In a Caskit Doods Taped Ya Nuts!!
You Pussy & I'm Dirty Something Like The Taste Of Sluts..
^^^^
terrible. "doods taped ya nuts?" dont make sense to me and the dirty like sluts shit is basic as hell
I'm Above This Dood Hes Da Ocean..Thats Obsession It Couldnt Be Devotion...
'Ya Styles Week' Like 7 Day "P PROMOTION!!"..
^^^^
i liked this bar
Have you Slayed-Man..Shorten Ya Days Span..Even In July I Bring May Ham...
^^^^
dont even talk to me about forced shit again lol. may ham? nah its mayhem
It's Deadly & Raw..My Mind Holds Macheddi's & Saws That'll Unsteady Ya Jaw..
^^^^
filler. this bar does nothing to enhance the verse
When I Write I Abuse Da Dope, Friend ya Hyped? Den Lose Ya Hope, End Ya Life i'll USE DA SCOPE..
Your Wack & Can't 'See Complexity Eye To Eye Its Like The Reason U REFUSE TA VOTE!..
^^^^
first lines is just multis with no substance.
second line is so so. i cant see complexity eye to eye? hardly damaging
This Could BE FATAL, I'ma Put Um 'Unda Flow' Like HE NAVAL, How Could He BE STABLE?
Hes 'Behind In The Box' Like T.V. CABLES
^^^^
nice idea but i never knew we were in a box.
Punch Fa Punch, Aint The Right Phraze...I Turned you To Dust Like Breakin up White Haze...
I At Sight Blaze..It's a Slight Phase..Like Layer Changes On a Nice Day...
^^^^
filler. punch never hit at all
You Aint a Champ Or King...i'll Have you Toned Down Like Samples Stringd.. Onto Tracks...
You a Ducka People On To That..Be a Honest Rat..You Wouldnt 'Grip A Tech' Like Omish Cats
^^^^
best bar of your verse. punch was dope although ive heard u use it before in the chatroom
Conclusion
below average verse. again like our battle you had little to no personals. a few decent punches here and there. a bunch of forced shit but at least the flow was good. i think we`ll just leave it at that lyrics wise coz honestly i dont feel this verse requires a response.
freepost time
ima only gonna say this once. how come anyone who goes at u 'is on your dick' and anyone who criticises your verses is a hater. u must honestly be retarded if u think this litte net spat is all me going at u because its going both ways and u know it. so please chill down with the "help cee4`s bullying me routine" nobody feels sorry for u and your weak diss verses. im gettin sick of this shit now. end of the day compare our records that tells u whos better. find anyone on this site who thinks ur better than me. also if theres pointless net beef hapening on illest who is always the common denominater? yep its always u involved with someone
Hazard got a mixtape comin but i doubt who will buy it
coz the only moo slims droppin weight are cows on a diet!
^^^
and yeah i see why u said thats forced but over here its pronunced moo slim
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/Muslim
dunno about May Ham tho lmao
ima only gonna say this once. how come anyone who goes at u 'is on your dick' and anyone who criticises your verses is a hater. u must honestly be retarded if u think this litte net spat is all me going at u because its going both ways and u know it. so please chill down with the "help cee4`s bullying me routine" nobody feels sorry for u and your weak diss verses. im gettin sick of this shit now. end of the day compare our records that tells u whos better. find anyone on this site who thinks ur better than me. also if theres pointless net beef hapening on illest who is always the common denominater? yep its always u involved with someone
Hazard got a mixtape comin but i doubt who will buy it
coz the only moo slims droppin weight are cows on a diet!
^^^
and yeah i see why u said thats forced but over here its pronunced moo slim
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/Muslim
dunno about May Ham tho lmao
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sum really good punches
here
hadda a good flow
never really fell off
consistent with the multies
which brought more power to the punch
this was dope Haz
keep'em comin
here
hadda a good flow
never really fell off
consistent with the multies
which brought more power to the punch
this was dope Haz
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect
!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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