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The truest shit I ever spoke 2

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2018

i'm an alcoholic, who can not drop thinking
spending all weekend, not sleeping
I use to jog and ball and now I'm in a fog feel an odd demon
because I can not stop drinking
someone you wouldn't even call, alcohol just had to Rob Ian
even though I could never be caught cheating
I give another small reason that I'm just lost wheepin
ready for a long evening
got the girl I ever wanted and I am not treating
right, gotta pause cause i wished I believed in God
but my women thinks I can be colder than the fall season
is it that much she just wants me to just start cleaning
I broke my heart because my world fell apart
anxiety and depression, spent to much time on the computer
reading which is the reason I'm a piece of shit
when your girl get sick of you so feverish
because she is annoyed so much and she is all freaking
and your feeding it because all you do is lay in bed
pray your dead even though every day you wish you could control your brain and head
its strange when said it causes so much rage when read
if i may confess I don't cry i don't stay in bed to take a rest
this is straight up death trying to make it through, i ain't the best
but when i lay and rest all I do is hate my mess
if you think for one second, I like this take a sec
and I understand the pain in my chest
I'm strained because I hate facing death
if I could do anything to change the fact I'm on the greatest edge
IF I ONLY CARED ABOUT MYSELF AND MY HAPPINESS I WOULDN'T BE THIS PAINFUL WRECK
I'D BE WHAT I WAS AT 17 A GREAT SUCCESS THOSE WERE THE DAYS BEFORE WHEN PEOPLE WEREN'T TAKING METH

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few rhyme mistakes. still true though.

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