Hip Hop Forum

Week One
2 Bars
Due By: Sunday December 11th, 2011
Submit Verses Here: Checkins are not required but encouraged

Goodluck

Check. Bars submitted.

AntiMaTTer

Keyd

Some of the site sayin your "Dope" thats from the IV fluid from BREAKIN UR BONES...
Just FACE IT YOU BLOW and only time you see Kau In "The Booth" is when hes MAKING A POST...
Not Displaying his Flow, googled his name cuz im wondering WTF this dude SMOKING ON...
Just to get a "Peek Atchu" and realize its a Cover for his Secret Obession about POKEMON!...
http://www.serebiiforums.com/member.php?u=133088


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Kau the Lion

Metaphorical violence will silence him, this is verbal assassination.
Cause an eyeful of this rifle will send his cap in the air like a graduation.

Your verses only make whine like I heard it through the grapevine.
I’ll carefully countdown your life, when I write my words I take time.

Some of the site sayin your "Dope" thats from the IV fluid from BREAKIN UR BONES...
Just FACE IT YOU BLOW and only time you see Kau In "The Booth" is when hes MAKING A POST...

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nice lil jab, in the setup, the end concept, was a let down tho, do you mean in the booth ,of a library, in a netcafe, because when i think of booth, i associate either a phone booth or a recording booth,and neither makes a connection to post, just how i see it..comes out a bit vague.


Not Displaying his Flow, googled his name cuz im wondering WTF this dude SMOKING ON...
Just to get a "Peek Atchu" and realize its a Cover for his Secret Obession about POKEMON!...

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nice wordplay, and good personal.. nice finish

kau's bars:

Metaphorical violence will silence him, this is verbal assassination.
Cause an eyeful of this rifle will send his cap in the air like a graduation.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^nice flow, and good pun , flip

Your verses only make whine like I heard it through the grapevine.
I’ll carefully countdown your life, when I write my words I take time.


^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^decent jab in setup, the end punch was a bit of a letdown..


mvgt anti, because everything else was hella close, or a tie, but the main factor was anti's use of a personal, into a punch..kau takes flow and vocab, side, multis tie, both had a nice bar and a weak bar, and if kau tried to integrate at least a name flip, he wouldve taken it.because the bars couldve been at anyone.... very close battle imo...

ok, lol,, then thats another scored personal..

If a more detailed vote is needed let me know but i gotta give this to Anti.

Kau's first line was good the second one didnt hit as hard for me while both of Anti's were funny and his closer killed it for me

mvgt-anti

Decent battle. Didn't care to much for anti's first bar but the 2nd one was aiight. Kau had a pretty decent 1st bar but i didn't think the 2nd bar hit as hard. Clever punch but not enough fire power

MVGT Anti