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Hypocrites
Ice Cubes one of the greatest, so I`ll be patient with this man
But how you gonna be anti racist, and rep the Nation of Islam!
America! land of the free, nah that`s long gone for the Chiefs
Spot the difference, Mandela n Osama both bombed for beliefs
They both thought they right, believed their cause warrants death
Everyone wanna get involved, keep it in the fam like Warren Jeffs!…

I aint stressed, I make illest kids need protection like its Eldorado!
It`s so no homo, but if its a battle im a man-eater like Nell Furtado!
Arv you elevating asshole?, fuck that Red Bull, Cee4 clips wings!
Pino or Jap? the same shit thing, my flow pierces Nips like a tit ring!
This is not a dream, n if u see me in the street I hope u got ya team
People bet on Arv? Yeah! his eyes make him look like a slot machine!
But u aint effeminate, big dawgs? Nah just poodles with a pink font!
Its so evident, im so intelligent, I got more noodle than a Chinks wok!
Wanna come at me? I think not, so prepare to be dead if ya test this
U know im reckless, fuck ya bling! I`ll snatch ya head off ya necklace!
Respect this, im strapped with no gun, take my belt buckle to that face!
If its trouble then im braced, keep punchin til my knuckles out of place!
No stubble on their face, I stop lil kids flows like the Hoover dam arch!
While they pop 'blackheads', faces lookin like the million man march!
I lost battles I shoulda won, fuck the votes, like that rat Bush involved
Problem solved, leave them a shell of themselves like Babushka dolls!
The kush done called, kop an ounce for 1-20, fuck gettin a dub lit
Pill poppin so fuck it, its Generation X n they swallow not suck it!
Buying for personal and friends, sell it? Nah I don't do it im a client
No more, but I stay blazin trees, I got the Carbon footprint of a giant!
Back then I would stab a bitch, our male life expectancy is only 54
Lower than the Gaza stip, I put a hole in ya front n it aint a kitty door!
With a lock back or a screwdriver, no pistol I only spit what I know
Dad got cancer of the blood, so ironic! coz his sons sick with the flow!
Its life I aint crying, nothing can stop me, I been scarred without dying
Stay on guard no denying, but im like morning wood- hard without trying!



Arvincible i owe you a couple of bars lol
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uppin some feed on this one
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Post by Omega Bill »

This is nice right here. Im gonna edit this post later when I have time and leave some detailed feed.

Okay now time for my feed.

This piece right here, like Dom said, could very well go into Classics. The flow through-out this piece could not be touched, the structure was near perfect, and the punches DID NOT stop hitting through the whole piece. It's hard enough to do 8-10 bars with constant, hard hitting punches, and you went 16 bars with it.

Dope fucking piece. I agree with Dom and give this a 9.5/10.

Props.
Last edited by Omega Bill on Fri Apr 25, 2008 12:35 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Momeijah »

This Was Fire The Whole Way Through, Probably The Best Punchline Drop ive Read On Here (That Wasn't Written By Me Haha).

But Really im Gnna Give This Like 9.5 Outta 10, Smooth Flow The Whole Way Through, Consistent Multis And Punches, Pretty Much Every Line Had a Punch. Some Were Good Punches, Some Were Awesome, The Ones That Stood Out Most To Me Were:

Arv you elevating asshole?, fuck that Red Bull, Cee4 clips wings!
Pino or Jap? the same shit thing, my flow pierces Nips like a tit ring!
This is not a dream, n if u see me in the street I hope u got ya team
People bet on Arv? Yeah! his eyes make him look like a slot machine!

Wanna come at me? I think not, so prepare to be dead if ya test this
U know im reckless, fuck ya bling! I`ll snatch ya head off ya necklace!

I lost battles I shoulda won, fuck the votes, like that rat Bush involved
Problem solved, leave them a shell of themselves like Babushka dolls!

Buying for personal and friends, sell it? Nah I don't do it im a client
No more, but I stay blazin trees, I got the Carbon footprint of a giant!
Back then I would stab a bitch, our male life expectancy is only 54
Lower than the Gaza stip, I put a hole in ya front n it aint a kitty door!

it Can Be Hard To Keep Up Punchline After Punchline For 16 Bars, Shit Was Sick The Whole Way Through, i Can Definitely See This Going into The Classics.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.

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Post by Omega Bill »

Me editing my post didn't bump this so I'm bumping this with this post cause more people should read it.
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thanks for the feed. appreciated
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