Rugged And Riposte Zombie Collab.

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I'm uppin this one, definitely should be read by any who haven't yet, captivating to the bone marrow...
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Dopest collab I have read this month. The way everything was laid out just fit together very nicely, and both of you came correct, no doubt. This theme was a tight concept to write with also, which made it more interesting of a read to see how it all developed and came together. Should get collab of the month IMO. Flame on this one.
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This is one of the best drops I've read in a long time. Your styles flowed real good together. Imagery was great and most importantly you told an interesting story. This could stand on it's own but I wouldn't mind reading a second part. Maybe the military shows up or something. Anyway, good shit, guys. Keep it up.
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Pretty sick shit, yo. I think everyone else has pretty much covered all the compliments, so I'll just say they were proper verses with nice delivery and really vivid imagery. Perfectly on topic all the way through and true to one another. Props.
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Still a dope ass piece...

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Hell yeah! I love this thing.

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epic, the first verse is dope, good multies good vocab good scene setting/imagery, good flow

the second verse is still dope but by no means as good as the first.. the multies were less frequent, flow was choppy in places but the vocab an imagery was still def on point

the quality of these two verses combined tho is insane, from the start i was hooked an wanted to finish an thats what topical writings all about ,, tryna capture the reader/listener dope post.

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i never put together that you were riposte lol. its got zombies and it's written by you. Of course i love it. Also i thought i fed this when it was first dropped. apparently not.

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damn...I thought I was readin the full description of left for dead or zombieland (minus woody harrelson and those fucken kids)...this shit was hella dope...made me visualize it as I was reading...
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