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Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Loon E Lou wins KO)

Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 5:54 am
by M33Kish
House rules, yada yada, pick your own beat.

EDIT!!!
jayzon_black wrote:
* Lyric Writing Process

^^^ New topic, Due whenever Lou.

this is my check.

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Re: Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Topical)

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2011 6:43 am
by Loon E Lou
Well???????? Checkers

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Re: Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Topical)

Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 7:22 pm
by M33Kish
[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/m33kish/rappin-for-dumbies-1[/soundcloud]

^^^^ Press play :violin:

Lyrics-

Gotta pick the beat first, what am I lookin for/
One to make em jump or will they dig my cool ass message more/
It's gotta be a banger or the world'll surely miss my words/
So lemme pick a slow one so I hit all of the gaps nd curves/

And errybodys waitin for the pen to hit the pad and slur/
But honestly my drink ain't made, so lemme get my glass and pour.../
My thought aloud real quick/
And pick the perfect flow to set my mellow sound and pitch, to ease your itch/

Cause Dr. Meekish is asleep until the drafts complete/
But don't you weep cause I Malik am on the way to get the geek/
He's probly in my mind just writtin rhymes and eating minnie wheats/
I think I need some inspiration, just to get my brain rotatin/

So let's take it to the basement, roll a swisher then I face it/
Vacant thoughts have taken placement through my mind and on the paper/
Lyrical labor, I'm just a slaver, beatin these beats just call it a favor/
Rappin for dumbies I am the author, this is my process take it and marvel/

Yes I'm gonna make a banger/
It's gonna bang/
Yes I'm gonna make a banger/
It's gonna bang/
Yes I'm gonna make a banger/
It's gonna bang/
But this right here is how it starts, so take some notes and just press play/

Hey now I'm thinkin somethin, writing in my phone and bumpin/
I can see the future, next one Ima play is N-do's album/
Half way through I'm in the loop but now I gotta take a.../
Hmm, let's just forget about that last statement/

And make it to a new bar yup my shit is flowin so far/
And it ain't much else to do but read it over in the booth/
But wait a minute where's the loop, I always skip it/
But this track is just so funky that I gotta make the flow just row right with it/

And I'm stickin wit the script, so ain't no need for no ad libin/
Keep it fresh and always different, that's where other rappers slippin/
So I kiss the Mic inject my hype, and turn my vocals up a smidgen/
then I turn the swag to 10 gazzilion 20 billion/

Man, that's fire bring it back, time to kick it and chillax/
And post it all over the forums I hope that all Illest is hearin dat/
This crack I've made is potent facts so next time that you tryna rap/
Just play this track and I can help you not do it so wiggidy wack/

Yes I'm gonna make a banger/
It's gonna bang/
Yes I'm gonna make a banger/
It's gonna bang/
Yes I'm gonna make a banger/
It's gonna bang/
But this right here is how it starts, fuck the outro hit replay/

Links coming soon.

Re: Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Topical)

Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:38 pm
by jayzon_black
House rules say I can't vote for ya, but damn...Thats what I'm talking about!

Re: Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Topical)

Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 2:10 am
by Loon E Lou
Damn meek i got ya later today man. I like this

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-- Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:04 am --

sorry for the lag man. lets gooooooooooooooooooooo

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/loonelou831/how-i-do-it[/soundcloud]

Re: Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Topical)

Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:25 am
by Alvin
Meekish, TURN UJP YA VOCALS, get some emotion man, I was digging your lyrics, but it just dragged on after a bit, the rhyme scheme switch up at the end of verse one was my favorite part just because it seemed a bit hyper, a bit more "out of norm" for you. I like it man, it's just missing the umph to be honest. Its your biggest downfall, still reading homie.

Loon E Lou, not bad man, i like this song as well. your style is as it always is, stylish lol. The hook is pretty good, wedding ring and all. Pretty dope all together man, not many complaints. But you should try something different as well, maybe a different style of beat to bring out a loon no one has ever seen before?

All in all, the only cat that i know goes to m33k is multies or rhyme scheme. The rest go to loon imo, so MVGT Loon e Lou

Re: Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Topical)

Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 1:05 pm
by AntiMaTTer
Man Loons stuff sounds just so much cleaning and louder vocals, smoother flow...shit sounds like a real track, just saying
props to both but its obvious Loons just ahead in audios.
my 2.

His flow, lyrics, rhythm, beat choice, and everything audio wise
was just ahead, better hook, sounds fairly clean.

Re: Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Topical)

Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 1:22 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
damnit i just voted.. where'd it go -.-


ok.... so... basically this seemed like a cat sweep, other than multis which i give to meek, meek this sounds familiar, same beat and flow as somethin u did before, i swear i heard this -.- lol anyways... it got old quick, both were consistent but overall loon took this

v/loon e lou

Re: Loon E Lou vs. M33Kish (Topical)

Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 1:30 pm
by Alvin
Loon E Lou wins KO