Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1 (Loon wins KO)

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Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1 (Loon wins KO)

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STRAIGHT BEEF!

PICK YOUR OWN BEAT!

DUE DATE: SATURDAY, MAY 28TH, 2011

TIME LIMIT: 3 MINUTES MAX. YOU DECIDE HOW TO USE THOSE 3 MINUTES.

WINNER PROCEEDS TO NEXT ROUND TO FIGHT FOR THE AUDIO HEAVYWEIGHT BELT

CATEGORIES TO VOTE ON:
-MULTIES-
-DELIVERY-
-PUNCHES-
-CREATIVITY-
-NAMEFLIPS-
-PERSONALS-
-CONSISTENCY-

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Re: Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1

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CHECK!!!!
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Re: Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1

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Re: Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1

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Here I go, sorry I guess i didnt really need the extension.

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Re: Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1

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heeeeeeeere you gooooooooooooooo!!!! :D :D :) :) :dance: :clap: :naughty:


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Re: Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1

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-MULTIES- M33k.. Loon E was pretty basic as to multi's.. some inner's and shit, but as to strings of them.. nothing that great, M33ks were also only a few syllables at a time, i just think (from what i could make out) were slightly longer, not necessarily delivered better though.
-DELIVERY- Loon E, hands down. not only was it easier to hear Loon E.. but his lines just had a much crisper feel to where the punch line should be..
-PUNCHES- Loon E, again. neither really went in, imo. few jabs an shit here.. but Loon E's cracks on his features is what grasped this for me.
-CREATIVITY- tie.. i didn't think either was overly creative by any means.
-NAMEFLIPS-tbh, i don't think either really do anything with this.. at all, Loon attempted some "meekshit-ish" stuff, but it wasn't really a name flip that would be considered.. so ima say neither clinched this.
-PERSONALS- Loon, crackin on M33k's features.. got this for me.
-CONSISTENCY- tie.. both were consistent with what they were doing.. neither really fell of course.

a few things, M33k.. your quality killed you, and i don't even know if its you have bad quality or your vocals are just so low i can't make out if you have bad quality or not. but hell, raise your vocals up, i couldn't hear jack shit.. for me to hear it i woulda had to blow my head phones.
Loon, alright verse.. tbh, sounded more like a free verse when you werent directly talking shit to him about him.. the biggest down fall of your verse, you just didn't punch enough.. but you did enough, imo, to clinch the win.

Vote: Loon..

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Re: Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1

Post by pest »

man meek, you good at audio... i think you need to attack more when you dissin someone, but you aint bad man. The thing about audio battles is you dont gotta hittem every line, but you needa make you lines a buildup for the next punch... some of your stuff seemed more self glorifying.

When you finna kill that beat i gave you? if you aint ima do it bro...

Loon man.. your voice sounds like slim. Your flow is conpletly diffrent but you sound like em dogg.. You hit meek hard with it. shits clownin.. that line what was it... "when he smiles he lookin like the sqaures on wheel of fortune" i was rollin....

-MULTIES- MEEK
-DELIVERY-LOON
-PUNCHES- LOON
-CREATIVITY- LOON
-NAMEFLIPS- LOON
-PERSONALS- LOON
-CONSISTENCY- LOON

Pretty mucha landslide... your verse was straight meek just needed to be a little better and more attacking
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Re: Audio Tournament: M33k vs Loon - R.1

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-MULTIES- M33Kish - Hands down for a more complex rhyme sheme
-DELIVERY- Loon E Lou - Just easier on the ears, less i had to try and make sense out of and rewind, with a nice hint of "swag" < Gay ass word by the way.
-PUNCHES- Loon E Lou - HIs just came easier to the ear. M33k had several aimed at loon as well, but the style he used made them less effective as punches... no real time to soak anything in lol.
-CREATIVITY- Loon E Lou - The concept of computer love and its diversity gave you this one. LMFA M33k Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!!!!
-NAMEFLIPS- M33kish - Than Disney line, where he's Mickey lol
-PERSONALS- Loon E Lou - Neither were too personal, but loon rode appearance more and
-CONSISTENCY- Loon E Lou - It would have been a tie, but at the beginning of m33ks verse, he falls off or spits awkwardly and it threw it all off for me.

M33Kish - LOL at the best track loon will do is the track you ghost wrote for him lol. This wasn't a bad battle at all. But your style really killed a lot of what you were saying. They were muffled by the beat or something... for instance, i heard you say panda, but have no idea what you said prior to that one word. Not bad for your first m33k... STOP READING


Loon E Lou - The intro is mad funny man, just the concept behind it is not what i expected for an audio tournament. You had some nice punches, but i was hoping for more blood man, more gutting of the opponent. The quality was crisp, even in your R&B section lol. I think the best line you dropped is your final one... or ummmmmmm less than one. but the final line is a nice im out line lol. "You're flowing quick? that just means you're losing faster bitch"... Hope you come harder in the final round...



MVGT Loon E Lou





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Loon E Lou wins KO and proceeds to FINAL ROUND

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