ROUND 1: Loon E. Lou Vs. Punch'd Drunk

[Alvin]

You woke up hungover and don't remember what you did the night before.

I'm leaning more towards a topical Loon. I can do all of them except the one I quoted lol. Let me know man.

[Loon E Lou]

yea man topical sounds ku. how we go about this now?

[Alvin]

How about "A track about starting over in life, finding something good to live for."?

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[Loon E Lou]

ku les roll with it. GL dawg

[Alvin]

Fuck luck homie, let's have some fun lol.

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[Loon E Lou]

haha. i got u on that. i wouldnt be doin this if it wasnt.

[Alvin]

Shit man, i just forgot, can we cancel out quality voting? my ish isn't up to par right off the bat in that area. And just to clarify, i plan to post the lyrics with the song loon, if that's cool

[Loon E Lou]

Yea its all good man. I prolly wont post the lyrics but i dont mind if u do.

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-- Tue Feb 08, 2011 3:57 am --

heres mine man

[Alvin]

GOOD SHIT LOON E LOU!

His Reason is I.mp3

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a child's chest can only take so many hits before it caves
the exact same way a human should only inflict what they can take
I walked slow afraid to break, talked slower. afraid I'd wake... them
a child's chest can only take so many hits before it caves
the exact same way a human should only inflict what they can take
he walked slow afraid to break, talked slower. afraid he'd wake... them

Back to the wall, knuckles bleeding
fighting himself & a life worth leaving
trapped in a cell he backs up and yells
the fact of his hell is that it's not his
its a forced image, a gimmick
he's being forced to live it
he's a fake, an impostor
pains delivered best in the breath of his father
a mother, with no supportive system
clean U.A.'s but they still claim, he shoves it in him
it bugs and like venom
the stress pumps out, the heart beat
a lions courage but the smarts weak
tears found a home on his scared cheek
I'm not talking about guns when i say he knew how to spark heat
but he cant find his way punch drunk alone on a dark street
he knew bruises and blood like raw meat
the survival type but even angels loose their wings
and evil changes every thing people angles can be damaging

a child's chest can only take so many hits before it caves
the exact same way a human should only inflict what they can take
I walk slow afraid to break, talk slower. afraid I'll wake... them
a child's chest can only take so many hits before it caves
the exact same way a human should only inflict what they can take
I walk slow afraid to break, talk slower. afraid I'll wake... them

he's punched and kicked, filled up with
everyone else failed ambitions and what they missed
the stomach twists hanging on a noose composed of their shit
invoked by the split lips and cut open skin
he's hopeless again, deaths slow motion with hope in the wind
imaginations dancing over tombstones broken with in
gun smoke with a grin hes choking the win
giving up is just a state of mind
he recites it to himself one last time
I'm doing this for you, I'm moving all of this to prove
that one human can do, anything
its true because I'm stuck remembering everything
i am he like he is you, dismembering
himself from all reality
his death hurts like an ignored cavity
hes not a victim but a casualty, the fallacy
of living lavishly transformed his agony into tragedy
what he wrote weighs on my mind more than gravity:

a child's chest can only take so many hits before it caves
the exact same way a human should only inflict what they can take
I walk slow afraid to break, talk slower. afraid I'll wake them
i wish there was something i could do to change but the strange thing is
I'm okay with leaving, ill help them more, when they're grieving
I'll serve a better person gone, than i ever will existing.



As stated above, do not vote on quality. Feel free to judge:
Flow
Delivery
Storytelling
Creativity
Multi's
Breath Control

[Loon E Lou]

dope drop dawg. shits nice

[Orfadox]

Flow - I Think Loon Just Edged This..Punch Your Flow Was Nice But Fell Off In Points Where As Loon's Flow Stayed Consistent Throuhout
Delivery - Again Loon Took This Just
Storytelling - Punch..Had A Very Nice Story To This Verse And Told It Nicely
Creativity - Punch..I Just Felt His Verse Had More Creativity Than Loon's
Multi's - Gunna Have To Say Tie On This Both Had Some Nice Multi's
Breath Control - Loon..Punch I Noticed Points Where You Were Having To Take A Breath Half Way Through A Sentence




Both Of These Verse's Were Very Nice..Although Loon Had Better Flow And Delivery Im Gunna Have To Give This To Punch..I Thought His Verse Had A Nice Story To It And He Came With More Creativity To His Verse


MVGT - Punch Drunk

[king nep]

Flow - To be honest i liked both flows but PD edged it out
Delivery - Loon was more consistent in this department but Pd wasnt way off great work here
Creativity - Pd took this especailly the chorus it kept me interested from the start
Multi's - Both were good so im giving use a tie in that department
Breath Control - both of use didnt do bad here again but loon just had more control here

difficult to vote here great work both use but Mvgt PD he made me listen all the way its like i wanted more sorry loon

[Alvin]

Thanks for taking the time to listen to both of our masterpieces and voting within the criteria. If Loons ok with the votes so far its:

2-Punchd/0-Loon E Lou

[Alvin]

Thanks for voting Cory.

2-Punchd/1-Loon E Lou

Couple more votes and we're golden

[Deception]

Flow - id say a tie tbh
Delivery - loon
Storytelling - PD
Creativity - PD
Multi's - PD
Breath Control - loon

gunna have to go with pd on this one with his better storytelling and creativness, although loon did come hard o reckon punch took this one, keep doing this shit guys.

peace