R1. Ambition vs. Loon E Lou

[Ambiguous Realm]

You both have 1 week exactly from this date to drop.

DO NOT post a track 4 minutes or longer(3:59 is as high as you can stretch it)

If you need a beat get a hold of me through a PM and I will assist you.

Read the rules before you drop.

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[Loon E Lou]

based on the situation i was faced with at work this week, im forced to drop this pre-maturely.not as long as i would of liked it but here it is.

[Haz]

The Lizard is meant to be there lol

http://www.www.illestlyrics.com/copyrig ... 18f37a33e/

[Loon E Lou]

Solid drop dawg. Let it begin

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[drunken jesus]

loon - alright track delivery could've been better at parts not a bad drop but no hard hitting punchlines and it was kinda short

ambo - pretty solid track some aight punches wow the weird ass song at the end killed me i dunno if you made that yourself or what but wow, kinda short track flow was choppy at points because of the weird way you write

vote - ambition, pretty clear W imo loons was alright but in all areas besides flow i think hazard edged him

[Leeroy Jenkins]

When I break it down on both sides, it looks like this...Loon is more enjoyable to listen to, his flow is better...his delivery is a bit better...the beat selection is even a bit better even though it's kind of soft for a battle...but I didn't hear a whole lot of punchlines or any lines that seemed brutally insulting aimed at ambition. Ambition didn't really have any lines that made me think "Holy shit" but he still had disses and they were alright, pretty much as Jesus said. His delivery and flow did seem a bit awkward at points but his presence isn't bad which sort of compensates.

I mean, I can't really say it's a clearcut winner. This isn't text where all you look at is the punchlines...but at the same time, it's not like Loon's verse was head and shoulders more polished and hard than ambition's, so when it comes down to it, the punchlines really are the deciding factor. In that aspect, Ambition just took it.

Vote - Ambition

[ThatSexyDude]

HEY YO SHAZ FUCK YOu dude you came sick i know we had beef but nahh you took this one, damn SICK FLOW finally yo ass can ride a beat i thought you was going come in this battle with that Mutual Flow


Vote- am

[Ambiguous Realm]

participants cannot vote.. there's a reason why i sent you guys a pm with the rules attached as well as posting it in each battle


1-0 haz

[complexity]

Hazard was a lot more consistent. His quality was better. He just came off more effective.

I don't know if I can break it down anymore. He did a short verse because Loon E Lou did.

Good battle.

Vote: Amb

[IntrinsicCadence]

I enjoyed listening to Loon-E more, his flow was smooth and was just straight enjoyable to listen to, but as a battle it just didn't quite hit.
I didn't enjoy the flow of Ambition nearly as much, but he did have a better battle stance.
My first impression was to lean towards Loon-E, but after considering what a battle is supposed to be, I'm gonna have to shift my vote towards Ambition.

Vote: Ambition

[Haz]

Crunchtime who are you ??

[Loon E Lou]

Good battle dawg! Knock em all out man. You kno i gotta try an redeem myself after the tourny. Good luck on ur upcomin battles amigo

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[Haz]

yeah good shit homie, lol you came hard, I think it was closer then made out to be/

[Lawgix]

lmao @ that ending on Haz's drop

[Ambiguous Realm]

That's a K.O., ambition moves on to the next round