Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(Lawgix wins 4-1)

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Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(Lawgix wins 4-1)

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aite then...

5 Bars
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72 Hours to drop from Check In

No Flips

consider this my check...
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Check and only 5 bars really ok I can deal with that.

-- Fri Jan 13, 2012 6:00 pm --

Bitch I Spit Raw , eat a dick like when ya Bitch Call…//
Fukk u , U would think I was the “Law” the way I Quick Draw!...//
I’ll smash on ya Toes till u Shout Aww , Bash on this foe in this Bout Brawl…//
Bash in ur nose till ur casket is closed!..cuz I’m a rebel the way I “Out Law”!...//
Get a box of porn for this Bitch’s Mom, be on squad control cuz my Shits bomb…//
Even tho when I lift arms it’ll be like a t.v. show the way I make u “Sit Com”!...//
Ignite sum Flame..trigga…that’ll make u Bite the Stain…//
Death! cuz in the end it’ll leave u X’ed, Like your name!...//
Check my Txt Well is the Best hell, bet your not gonna Rap...//
I'll x L(excel), cuz 5 bars in 3 days?? , now wheres the Lawqix in that!...//

I'm done drop when ur ready no flips so that means no feeding on this haha.
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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle

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man i got no time for a text battle but i'll show this FUCKER THE DOOR!
his record? NON EXISTANT like when his mom should have CHOSE TO ABORT!

seriously? this dudes trippin! listen i'll put you in one of the WORST POSITIONS
like when ur gettin bent over the counter in ya kitchen n ya boyfriend HURTS ya KITTEN!

speakin of balls son, u got ZERO.. look at my wins! see my 13? after this you can PLUS ONE!
the ONLY reason you called me out Py is cuz you can't count bars but i'm counted as BAR NONE!

i got HEART SON i'm fire... your flame extinquished now you're only LEFT A FLAMER
but fuckin with Law lil boy'll get LEFT IN DANGER like SEX WITH STRANGERS!

i'm lookin at u thru the scope of my pen cuz i'ma murder this PEST IN ANGER
n i dont do gun talk but i ain't scared to watch lyrical bullets hit Dizzle after they LEFT THE CHAMBER!

EASY!
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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle

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Structure: Tie
Flow: Law
Multies: Py
Personals: Py (name play)
Punches: ehhhh.. Law
Originality: Tie
Aggression: Law

Shit seemed rushed from both to be honest, punches lacked anything really hard really, can tell Lawgix does audio from the flow in this battle, and the aggression helped.
Py you had good ideas, if you'd only worked on them and cleaned up the actually lines themselves you possibly would have won this.

Anyway, IMO VOTE - Lawgix
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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(READY FOR VOTES)

Post by smallsuno »

this was a dope battle...both came hard...

Pydizzle had more nameplay...

Lawgix had the total package...everything was solid on his part...

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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(READY FOR VOTES)

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Pydizzle

Bitch I Spit Raw , eat a dick like when ya Bitch Call…//
Fukk u , U would think I was the “Law” the way I Quick Draw!...//

Not the best but aight.

I’ll smash on ya Toes till u Shout Aww , Bash on this foe in this Bout Brawl…//
Bash in ur nose till ur casket is closed!..cuz I’m a rebel the way I “Out Law”!...//

Punch had alot more potential if you worked on it.

Get a box of porn for this Bitch’s Mom, be on squad control cuz my Shits bomb…//
Even tho when I lift arms it’ll be like a t.v. show the way I make u “Sit Com”!...//

Idea was there but kinda weak.

Ignite sum Flame..trigga…that’ll make u Bite the Stain…//
Death! cuz in the end it’ll leave u X’ed, Like your name!...//

Aight.

Check my Txt Well is the Best hell, bet your not gonna Rap...//
I'll x L(excel), cuz 5 bars in 3 days?? , now wheres the Lawqix in that!...//

Aight.

Lawgix

man i got no time for a text battle but i'll show this FUCKER THE DOOR!
his record? NON EXISTANT like when his mom should have CHOSE TO ABORT!

The whole your mom shoulda had an abortion thing is so so played, but aight.

seriously? this dudes trippin! listen i'll put you in one of the WORST POSITIONS
like when ur gettin bent over the counter in ya kitchen n ya boyfriend HURTS ya KITTEN!

Again very played, punch was weaker too.

speakin of balls son, u got ZERO.. look at my wins! see my 13? after this you can PLUS ONE!
the ONLY reason you called me out Py is cuz you can't count bars but i'm counted as BAR NONE!

Your best bar so far.

i got HEART SON i'm fire... your flame extinquished now you're only LEFT A FLAMER
but fuckin with Law lil boy'll get LEFT IN DANGER like SEX WITH STRANGERS!
Aight.

i'm lookin at u thru the scope of my pen cuz i'ma murder this PEST IN ANGER
n i dont do gun talk but i ain't scared to watch lyrical bullets hit Dizzle after they LEFT THE CHAMBER!

Filler really, bad bar to end on.

Punchlines: Lawgix, just.
Personals: Pydizzle, Lawgix's verse was pretty generic.
Wordplay: Pydizzle just edges it with more attempted name play.
Flow: Lawgix
Multi's: Pydizzle
Humour: Lawgix edges this with more attempts.

Like Spawn said both verses seemed rushed and the punched wasnt really that hard. Lawgix i found your verse to be quite generic and could be used against anyone, the idea's was quite played too. Pydizzle your verse had potential but lacked that last bit of each punch to make them hit nice. The cat's tied, but since to me the 3 most important cats in battling ate Wordplay, Personals and Punchlines, since Pydizzle took two of the three, he gets my voye.

Vote - Pydizzle
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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(READY FOR VOTES)

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2-1... uppin
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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(READY FOR VOTES)

Post by EL tots irA »

structure: lawgi
flow:lawgix
punches:lawgix
wordplay:py


i think you guys both need to use better vocab
good battle the structure thing is new to me but now see why lawgix is just easier to read ,both had good punches lawgix best :
speakin of balls son, u got ZERO.. look at my wins! see my 13? after this you can PLUS ONE!
the ONLY reason you called me out Py is cuz you can't count bars but i'm counted as BAR NONE!
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to Py best:Check my Txt Well is the Best hell, bet your not gonna Rap...//
I'll x L(excel), cuz 5 bars in 3 days?? , now wheres the Lawqix in that!...//
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lawgix just came with more
mvgt:lawgix
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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(READY FOR VOTES)

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3-1 uppin... good battle Py
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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(READY FOR VOTES)

Post by leeroi green »

Well I read py and thought well law has this in the bag then I read laws and was like well that was close so now I gotta break it down

Opener- law came harder

Personals were bout even
Punches law
Nameplay py
Flow law

Closer-law

Py did alright and I can see where you were trying to go but unfortunately no sting

Law missed in a few places but it was enough

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Re: Lawgix vs Py Dizzle(READY FOR VOTES)

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Lawgix wins 4-1 TKO.


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