Teflon vs. Phenom ( Phenom Wins By K.O.)

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Teflon vs. Phenom ( Phenom Wins By K.O.)

Post by Teflon »

Haha I actually couldn't post this topic til I got 10 posts..Anyway

10 Lines/5 bars
First to 5 votes, no dickryding be fair, I was fair with my vote sorry I only had a few posts.
Check in first
I'll drop sometime tonight later on.


Goodluck

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Not droppin til you check in, whenever you do I'm ready so here's my check.

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When you going to check in damn I was ready to drop my shit last night how long does it take to put 10 lines together? Come on bro you accepted my request saying I'm not going to win, so let's see whats up

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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom

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Check. Drop your shit,
I'm not going to battle you..But I do prefer it if my prey put's up a fight.


Beneath the surface..I'm overheating your receiver circuits by unleashing Deeper verses that priests speak in churches.
What you preach is worthless, your worship defeats the purpose. Like president Obama taking bullets for the secret service
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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom

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Alright good let's get to the point....


Phenom your text is shit written, It's weak and gettting ignored
So I'm going to pull a Chris Brown, and Beat this Bitch to the Floor
Call me Tyson cause it's over in a few punches ring the bell
Hit me? No way, Only way this dude's going' to connect is DSL!
Fake bars and weak punches is the only repetition a fag has,
I'll put your pops in the trash, thats my definition of bag dad
I get writer's block once in a while, but im still defeating this geek
Sometimes I can't think of shit.... Yet you manage it week after week..
I'll take ya mic from you, murk you till your bones crushed,
See i ain't never took a L cause homie I purchase my own dutch...

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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom

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Ok.

A Good Battle Is Hard To find This Dudes Bars & Rhymes Are as Bout as Effective as an Armless Mime
Your Level’s So Far From Mine, I Wouldn’t Be Surprised if You Were Living on Martian Time.
My Bars & Lines Are Effortlessly Incredible, Teflon, I’d Have a Harder Time Sparring a Coma Vegetable
Speakin of Vegetable Your More than Edible “You and Eaten” Go together Like “Whore & Sexual”
I Step On, Not Really Worried About Teflon, I’m “Happy to put the Pumpt to em” Like free Gas @ Chevron
And I Really Hope You have a Vest on, Because It’s the only way to Know Your Teflon When your Head N Necks Gone
I’m a Text God, Your Just Another Subject Waitin’ On Judgment, Ill Put the Guns Clips Right where Your Toungue Sits
Boy, Ive Got Some Destructive Punches, With One Hit Leave You Stumblin’ With Your Lungs Ripped
Even if You Packed Your Lunches With Sunkist & Sun Chips you Still Wouldn’t “Son Shit”
Dumbshit, Your Whole Flow Is Redundant, Your Shit Wouldn’t Be Cold With Snow in Your Stomach




VOTES plz
I'm not going to battle you..But I do prefer it if my prey put's up a fight.


Beneath the surface..I'm overheating your receiver circuits by unleashing Deeper verses that priests speak in churches.
What you preach is worthless, your worship defeats the purpose. Like president Obama taking bullets for the secret service
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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom

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Nice drop homie let's get some votes now please

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^
I'm not going to battle you..But I do prefer it if my prey put's up a fight.


Beneath the surface..I'm overheating your receiver circuits by unleashing Deeper verses that priests speak in churches.
What you preach is worthless, your worship defeats the purpose. Like president Obama taking bullets for the secret service
.

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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom

Post by eMCee Havic »

punches-p
flow-p
multis-p
hilarity-t (it was literally funny)
rhymes-p


favorite teflon line
"Phenom your text is shit written, It's weak and gettting ignored
So I'm going to pull a Chris Brown, and Beat this Bitch to the Floor"

favorite phenom line
"My Bars & Lines Are Effortlessly Incredible, Teflon, I’d Have a Harder Time Sparring a Coma Vegetable
Speakin of Vegetable Your More than Edible “You and Eaten” Go together Like “Whore & Sexual”"

vote- phenom
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you should be afraid of all the people in the streets

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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

punches:phenom..overall just had harder hits
rhymescheme:phenom for that nice intro
creativity:phenom for that teflon line
complexity:phenom
entertainment:phenom

overall: phenom by a catsweep

teflon did pretty decent, phenom just topped it

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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom

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Aight finally got some votes good look fellas, 2-0 you man up again

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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom

Post by Haz »

Punches : Phenom
Wordplay : Phenom
Multis : Phenom ( Tef Came Sloppy )
Consistency - Both..
Flow - Both..

Overall Vote : Phenom

I'll put your pops in the trash, thats my definition of bag dad

Lines Like That Made Gave Him The Advantage Over You..
Try Usin Fresher Plays..

Anyways good Battle
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Re: Teflon vs. Phenom ( Phenom Wins By K.O.)

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has the records been updated? this is being locked.. im not updating records assuming it has been, mods n admins make sure after u edit the topics title that u also update records and lock the topic..make sure that u post the notification that it HAS been updated

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