Hazard vs Subsist(Hazard Wins T.K.O.)

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Hazard vs Subsist(Hazard Wins T.K.O.)

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I dont care how people vote. Hazard if you do then please include your cats
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...so, hazard, when you finish writing, please let this battle start.
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lol what a pussy, someone close this, thanks.
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[align=center]Lyrically..

I'm Known To Pack A Shail..While Your Style's Just Wack N Frail...
I'ma Own U Like a Packaged Sale..It's Like Mortal Combot Spittin Cause 'Sub Zero' Ona Rappin Scale!!!

Fuck it..

You'll get Left Crisp Clown..I Can't Tell You How Wack Ya Writ's Sounds..
I Hope This Prick Drowns..When It Come's To Punches Hes Known To 'Throw a Miss' Like Chris Brown!!...

Can He Live?..

i'll Let The Rifle Spit Then i'll Knife ya Trick N Leave ya 'Body Parts Across Cee' Like The Title Prick...

Lmao...

You Rusty..Why Should Ya Be Racin? Dood Is Corny We Won't Let Um Directly In a Tourney Cause Subs Only GOOD FA REPLACIN!!...

A Hazard's Who This Whore's Bin Provokin..I'ma 'Send Sub Unda' Like The Goverment's Explorin The Ocean...

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dont need more than a shank ta morbidly crank ya
call ya al pacino the way ya posin as gangsta
retreat to your sanctum, this beast will make ya sieze ta function
the only way you're 'street' is if you meet with disjunctions
to battle me is to meet with withdrawal, you need ta stall
cause to write against me you need a week-end before
you're a weak ass whore taping your bro getting beat to the floor
only way you 'dealin with a case' is if you been through divorce
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Post by repteelay »

haz had the agression and the confidence. sub just came in with that wordplay and shut it down.

vote = subsist
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Post by K KiLLaH »

Flow:Tie
Punches:Hazards punches hit harder
Personals:Haz def used a lotta nameplay(which is def under the cat personals)
Ent:Haz
Wordplay:um haz had the more quality wordplay n less played

vote:my vote goes to the haz-been lmao
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Post by Logic »

i know you lot have a minimum post rule but looks like you lot struggling with votes..discount it if you will..i know my shit though

first of all hazard those bar lengths..jeez! id like to see that spit to a beat you gotta cut that shit down!

You'll get Left Crisp Clown..I Can't Tell You How Wack Ya Writ's Sounds..
I Hope This Prick Drowns..When It Come's To Punches Hes Known To 'Throw a Miss' Like Chris Brown!!...

probably your best line..multis meant the bar length wasnt such a problem..good punch

You Rusty..Why Should Ya Be Racin? Dood Is Corny We Won't Let Um Directly In a Tourney Cause Subs Only GOOD FA REPLACIN!!...

man..you could have flipped this SO much better!!!

finisher was nice..like the wordplay

subsist..

hmm took you 5 days to reply?

shorter bar lengths made the verse flow better..unlike hazards yours could actually be spit over a beat..not much interbar rhyme or multis in there though..that could have taken it to the next level

dont need more than a shank ta morbidly crank ya
call ya al pacino the way ya posin as gangsta

could have worked on that al pacino line so much better..sounds played

retreat to your sanctum, this beast will make ya sieze ta function
the only way you're 'street' is if you meet with disjunctions

i liked this..prolly your two best lines

your finisher didnt hit hard at all..deal with a case? who cares? yeah its wordplay but it needs to have a punch otherwise its just meaningless similes

this is really hard to call..hazard took the punches and wordplay..subsist took the flow, and had some killer lines..

hazard shades it..JUST..good battle boys

vote - hazard
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Post by Haz »

My Text N Audio Style Is Completely Different Logic.


2-1 Uppin Votes
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Post by Subsist »

after waiting 11 days , i posted this:

Subsist wrote:lol what a pussy, someone close this, thanks.

then he did post but i didnt know , so thats why it took me 5 days to reply.
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Post by $incEar »

he did take a long time to reply ..but none the less

You Rusty..Why Should Ya Be Racin? Dood Is Corny We Won't Let Um Directly In a Tourney Cause Subs Only GOOD FA REPLACIN!!...

that was just mean ..and basing a battle on all elements lyrical & conceptual...hazard easly takes this in my vote
had everything consistanly ...very well put together ..Eazy read & eazy to understand ..

so my vote goes to hazard..
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Post by Dghost »

I wasnt feeling Sub, his shit was aiight but didnt reverbrate with me. Hazard
came alot harder for some one who went first so I got to give it to Haz, by the way, I got some battles in the Callouts sect, with Superior how do I post em here so they can be judged?

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I'll Set It Up For You.
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