Topic: Last topic was what made you who you are today. Now, you have to jump 10 years from now. Where are you at in life? What're you doing? Will you be the same person?
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Final Round: Arvincible vs HarleQuin(Arvincible)
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Final Round: Arvincible vs HarleQuin(Arvincible)
Last edited by Omega Bill on Sat May 17, 2008 10:35 am, edited 3 times in total.
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I am now living the life that my parents had died to give,
And I survived to live, now with my beautiful wife n kids,
Aging with a stable fam, so much content as an able man,
Because four years before this, I was forced to make a plan
And my girl became a nurse and I went straight into c. tech
I moved from rags, large shirts to fitted pants and v-necks
So I spent the last 10 years in a quest 2 beat the average
I got a stable job, a house and I beat the best to live in lavish
Drop the gambling habits, and quit the drugs and the drinkin
And I got cashed up bankin, when I took franklins over lincolns
Stability n growth, gratified by my own abiltity to last an oath
One time went broke but I hustled hard to grab the ropes*
One thing I learned from the years passin, is never fear blastin
Keep a clear steer for my actions n never release my dear passions,
So now im livin with green grass and a tree house in the back
Not carin if life speeds past as long as my kids lives are on track
I sleep peacefully now, never one eye open cuz im unsure
I got three big dogs in the house to make my fam feel secure
My children are pure, imma raise them to never be demure,
So there won't be set backs in their lives unlike mine for sure
So the prince becomes king, decisions wise though my eyes seen dumb things
All the troubles that love brings, this is how I made it to come clean
My strength to make things work is what I used 2 the advantage
I learned this age can strike faster than maturity can manage...
I placed myself 10 years from now and talked about the past that hasn't happened yet...understand?
*grab the ropes means not to submit, like in wrestling
And I survived to live, now with my beautiful wife n kids,
Aging with a stable fam, so much content as an able man,
Because four years before this, I was forced to make a plan
And my girl became a nurse and I went straight into c. tech
I moved from rags, large shirts to fitted pants and v-necks
So I spent the last 10 years in a quest 2 beat the average
I got a stable job, a house and I beat the best to live in lavish
Drop the gambling habits, and quit the drugs and the drinkin
And I got cashed up bankin, when I took franklins over lincolns
Stability n growth, gratified by my own abiltity to last an oath
One time went broke but I hustled hard to grab the ropes*
One thing I learned from the years passin, is never fear blastin
Keep a clear steer for my actions n never release my dear passions,
So now im livin with green grass and a tree house in the back
Not carin if life speeds past as long as my kids lives are on track
I sleep peacefully now, never one eye open cuz im unsure
I got three big dogs in the house to make my fam feel secure
My children are pure, imma raise them to never be demure,
So there won't be set backs in their lives unlike mine for sure
So the prince becomes king, decisions wise though my eyes seen dumb things
All the troubles that love brings, this is how I made it to come clean
My strength to make things work is what I used 2 the advantage
I learned this age can strike faster than maturity can manage...
I placed myself 10 years from now and talked about the past that hasn't happened yet...understand?
*grab the ropes means not to submit, like in wrestling
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Career
10 years, on the brink of 30 done with the growing stage, passed all the things that hurt me.
i've already proved im worthy, worked for guys who had millions and took rejection with no hard
feelings, just went on and broke about 8 glass ceilings. Adamant in my dealings and due to my
catalytic personality, failure was just a technicality, ive brought all my dreams to reality.
i'm fulfilled in life, love, and sexuality by a husband that shows hes proud of me.
Marriage
Found one who took breath when he met me and it takes much to impress me. a guy who didnt surpress
me and whos goal wasnt to undress me. a wedding that wasnt hard for me, i sed 'i do' so easily.
Children
Unfortunately,it hasnt come to be, the day the world got life from me, but there will come
a time, more than likely three, i never thought id have a kid, when the thought came id get rid of it
in my life plans, it didnt fit but now i sorta envy it, theres an empty feeling, and that might be it
ill never know until i fill it. only something from within inside me could fill that internal capacity
Perserverance
10 years ago i realized there's no rewrites or rewinds of the passed life so to make my future last
i had to succeed fast. life dont wait, i copped a phd at 28, then sed fuck fate. its my choice
to have the best, cursed with finesse and brilliance unlike the rest. i acquired prowess and
prestige, then passed all to test me and watched the lord bless me.
Negatives
ppl say life is what you make of it but every single one has its negatives. ill be the first who
confesses theres much stress with my successes, a struggle for the prada and the lexus, even me who
impresses, has my imperfections, hell you cant clean up without the messes.
Friendships
many used to hate, with insults so empty but now their faces are friendly, hearts wrapped in envy but
theyre really workin against me but fuck those who resent me i dont need friends to defend me, and i
dont need pity to mend me cus i still use writing for venting, my mind always inventing
life is hard so ive stayed stagnent to combat it. like an addict im stuck achieving, it comes as swift
as my breathing.to others my actions serve as inspirations no need for personality alerations just countless
exultations, cus ive beat my expectations.
10 years, on the brink of 30 done with the growing stage, passed all the things that hurt me.
i've already proved im worthy, worked for guys who had millions and took rejection with no hard
feelings, just went on and broke about 8 glass ceilings. Adamant in my dealings and due to my
catalytic personality, failure was just a technicality, ive brought all my dreams to reality.
i'm fulfilled in life, love, and sexuality by a husband that shows hes proud of me.
Marriage
Found one who took breath when he met me and it takes much to impress me. a guy who didnt surpress
me and whos goal wasnt to undress me. a wedding that wasnt hard for me, i sed 'i do' so easily.
Children
Unfortunately,it hasnt come to be, the day the world got life from me, but there will come
a time, more than likely three, i never thought id have a kid, when the thought came id get rid of it
in my life plans, it didnt fit but now i sorta envy it, theres an empty feeling, and that might be it
ill never know until i fill it. only something from within inside me could fill that internal capacity
Perserverance
10 years ago i realized there's no rewrites or rewinds of the passed life so to make my future last
i had to succeed fast. life dont wait, i copped a phd at 28, then sed fuck fate. its my choice
to have the best, cursed with finesse and brilliance unlike the rest. i acquired prowess and
prestige, then passed all to test me and watched the lord bless me.
Negatives
ppl say life is what you make of it but every single one has its negatives. ill be the first who
confesses theres much stress with my successes, a struggle for the prada and the lexus, even me who
impresses, has my imperfections, hell you cant clean up without the messes.
Friendships
many used to hate, with insults so empty but now their faces are friendly, hearts wrapped in envy but
theyre really workin against me but fuck those who resent me i dont need friends to defend me, and i
dont need pity to mend me cus i still use writing for venting, my mind always inventing
life is hard so ive stayed stagnent to combat it. like an addict im stuck achieving, it comes as swift
as my breathing.to others my actions serve as inspirations no need for personality alerations just countless
exultations, cus ive beat my expectations.
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Creativity-tied
both were very good. Arv.'s used is imaginations and made it like real life shit.HQ's made me see her as like she really was as old as she said in the raps. very convincing
Vocab-HQ
HQ had more uses of words. and words that are more advanced.Arv.'s were advanced too but HQ's were constant.
Flow-Arv.
His flowed better than HQ's.It was kinda hard to flow with HQ's.I think it was because how she showed it not distingushing her rhymes. i had to go back a few times and re read it and Arv's. i didnt
it was a very good battle from the both of u.U 2 deserve a pat on the back for these drops.
Overall-
HQ.
she came better. it seemed more realstic to me and if i didnt know id believe that she was 28 or would be. Arv's was good but HQ came harder and better
good job both of you
both were very good. Arv.'s used is imaginations and made it like real life shit.HQ's made me see her as like she really was as old as she said in the raps. very convincing
Vocab-HQ
HQ had more uses of words. and words that are more advanced.Arv.'s were advanced too but HQ's were constant.
Flow-Arv.
His flowed better than HQ's.It was kinda hard to flow with HQ's.I think it was because how she showed it not distingushing her rhymes. i had to go back a few times and re read it and Arv's. i didnt
it was a very good battle from the both of u.U 2 deserve a pat on the back for these drops.
Overall-
HQ.
she came better. it seemed more realstic to me and if i didnt know id believe that she was 28 or would be. Arv's was good but HQ came harder and better
good job both of you
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Creativity-Harle
Harle
She organized significantly better and made an attempt to stay straight forward as possible.
Vocab-ARV
Despite the fact that Hq has a more broad vocabulary. Arv tied it in a lot better in my opinion.
Flow-Arv.
Arv it's not even close.
It was a great battle and both came with their strenths and witnesses.
But this is a rap and Arv came stronger in all categories besides one or two. His story actually is believable and so was HQ's.
I feel Arv addressed some real problems that he'd encounter in his life.
I feel HQ summarized the 10 years, in her honest opinion of how they would be.
In all conclusions, Arv, just took his rapping skills and came through on this topical battle. He also had less weak lines.
Overall- Arvincible
Harle
She organized significantly better and made an attempt to stay straight forward as possible.
Vocab-ARV
Despite the fact that Hq has a more broad vocabulary. Arv tied it in a lot better in my opinion.
Flow-Arv.
Arv it's not even close.
It was a great battle and both came with their strenths and witnesses.
But this is a rap and Arv came stronger in all categories besides one or two. His story actually is believable and so was HQ's.
I feel Arv addressed some real problems that he'd encounter in his life.
I feel HQ summarized the 10 years, in her honest opinion of how they would be.
In all conclusions, Arv, just took his rapping skills and came through on this topical battle. He also had less weak lines.
Overall- Arvincible
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