Alpha Bill vs JayGunna(Gunna)

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Got cocky when ya beat Haz when ya barely outrhymed dude
Only reason I aint in ya crew is cause you knew Id outshine you!

decent. kinda not true coz he murdered Hazard

Heres outline of time spent on Illest, you aint close to the best
You call out Miilz for a cheap win, why dont you ever call out vets?!

he called out Plex when he came so the punch dont work
he also called out me and im better than most of the vets

Game set, 3 hollowed points shot at the clock with the days buzza
I went to 6th Asylum and aint no one even fuckin hearda JayGunna!*

nice punch. good bar

Name S.A.W. but faggot you aint sharp, n you dont wanna clash man
Because your nothing more than a maggot inside of Illests trash can!

first line was good. the second lacked creativity

Got no cash fam, laugh when your crew dies cause they're washed up
Like oceans where ya crew lies, cause if they active its a toss up!

decent punch

Slice your throat, you a pussy kid youll never get Rell's respect
Say u a solider, only thing you ever fought for was a welfare check!

decent punch. the first line dont make sense coz him and relll are in a crew so obviously he has his respect

Holdin your neck, shockwaves throughout, feelin the electrocuted
Like the death penalty, u can put ya own name under 'Lyrically Executed'!**

alrite decent bar

overall the verse was solid. you made plenty of attempts at personals but a most of them were not true. a few nice punches and few that lacked creativity. decent structure multis and flow.



Beating You Is A Task To Be Dealt With..Like An Asswhoopin Proposition!! So This Battle Was Certainly Not Ya Vision../
BETA (Better) Fall Back..Or People Will Catch Jay Out Stomping Alpha..Similar To Fraternity Competitions!!!//

nice punch.

Hate To Be Evil…But It's Time To Teach You A LESSON B This Is Not A FELONY..But Im Spraying The Eagle!!//
Hatin Ya Ego..He Garbage..You'll Never Here People Scream ALPHA A MEGA (omega) ONE!!! Like Atheist People!!!//

again nice punch. your bars seem kinda forced to me though

You Loosing?..Certain!! Calling Me Out Was Retarded Must Feel Like A Stupid Person!!//
Once The STEEL FILL…I'll Be Quick To KILL BILL Like I Was Uma Thurman!!!//

punch was alright. im sure the Kill Bill thing must of been used before though

Jay Gunna Lets Battle?..Cant Believe This Kat Said It...Like Homos With Braids I'll Leave This Fag Dreaded!!//
HE'S SICK?..Nah Cause When This EMCEE SPITS..No One Pays Bill No Mind Like People With Bad Credit!!!//

my favourite bar from the battle. nice wordplay and a dope punch

Im Clappin This Soldier..Grab The Mack Out The Holster..Told This Fag That Its Over/
Pussy? He Gets No FEEL Only Time Chicks Insert BILL Is When They Want A Snack Or A Soda!!!//LMAO

not feelin the gun talk but the punchline was dope

overall a good verse. that last couple of punchlines were dope. good flow and multis. one thing i wasnt feelin was the gun talk and some of filler u used.

Punches - Jay Gunna
Personals - Tie (wasnt feelin Bills personals and Jay had plenty of nameplays so i call it even)
Flow - Wild Bill
Structure - Tie (Gay cat. they had different structures but i liked them both)
Entertainment - Jay Gunna (the last 2 bars took it for him)

close battle but
Vote Jay Gunna
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2-2
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Post by JayGunna »

yes real votes...

2-2 uppin
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uppin on this

2-2
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Post by HKX »

My vote goes 4 Wild Bill

(Heres outline of time spent on Illest, you aint close to the best
You call out Miilz for a cheap win, why dont you ever call out vets?!)

He got gunna on dat one nice punchline homie

Punches - WB
Personals - WB
Flow - Tie
Structure - WB
Entertainment - Tie
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Post by Omega Bill »

Thanks for votin.

3-2 in my favor.
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Post by JayGunna »

2-3 uppin
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Post by Prophet »

Punches: Jay
Personals:Bill
Flow: tie
Structure: Bill
Entertainment: Jay

It was a pretty close battle, kinda like Hazard said Bill, you can come up with some hard personals, but if u can turn into clever concepts, they'd be way more damaging. This was a good battle but Jay GMV I enjoyed his verse a lil bit more.
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Post by Omega Bill »

3-3

Thanks for votin.
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Post by JayGunna »

Yeh Thanks For Voting...

3-3 Uppin...
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Post by Omega Bill »

Good looks on votin man.

3-4.
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Punches: Jay
Personals: Bill
Flow: Jay
Structure: Bill
Multies:Tie
Entertainment: Jay

V/Jay
No Hate

Slice your throat, you a pussy kid youll never get Rell's respect
Say u a solider, only thing you ever fought for was a welfare check!
Holdin your neck, shockwaves throughout, feelin the electrocuted
Like the death penalty, u can put ya own name under 'Lyrically Executed'!**

Heres outline of time spent on Illest, you aint close to the best
You call out Miilz for a cheap win, why dont you ever call out vets?! <------ROFL
^^^^^^Fav Bars

Hate To Be Evil…But It's Time To Teach You A LESSON B This Is Not A FELONY..But Im Spraying The Eagle!!//
Hatin Ya Ego..He Garbage..You'll Never Here People Scream ALPHA A MEGA (omega) ONE!!! Like Atheist People!!!//

Im Clappin This Soldier..Grab The Mack Out The Holster..Told This Fag That Its Over/
Pussy? He Gets No FEEL Only Time Chicks Insert BILL Is When They Want A Snack Or A Soda!!!//LMAO
^^^^^^Fav Bars


No Hate Both Was Nice just Jay Hit Harder..Dont Have To Accept Vote.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Nah, I'll accept it. I'm not one to piss and moan over votes anymore.

5-3. Good battle.

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