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Arvincible vs YungDosia

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5 bars

no hate, too much love or gay sex

cats are

Punches-
Personals-
Flow-
Wordplay-
Entertainment-

just copy n paste that^^


check in when ur ready buddy..this should be a good battle and im assuming ull be undefeated still when you get to me..

we'll have a 48 hour deadline

this is my check gl




oh yeah no swaying please
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fa show...

check this is gonna be nice...

and guess im not undefeated still should be but lets get it in

also in the rules...break down the bars.

-- Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:57 am --

this is due tonight right vinci?...
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yeah
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shiiit....ite i will try and drop tonite
Last edited by YungDosia on Mon Jan 11, 2010 5:34 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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okay just drop when u finish and ill do the same

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You better prey u last…with yo gay ass raps anything u say ill smash…
All u spits ‘Garbage’…So A.R.V. suits u well since ur trailer trash..!!
Im a blaze some hash…cuz listening to this clown is Totally Boring…
And Someone Call Al Gore…
Cuz his lines are so Watered Down…He probly started global warming…!!
Dude thought beating ‘J’ was nuff to challenge me, must be going thru a joke phase…
After 1 battle u turn pro? Dog I burn dro everyday…how hard is it to smoke haze..!!
I deserve to be the champ! Gimmi the title, the belt nigga gimmi my spot…
Cuz when I got it…
Your whack ass will be like Underage Kids in bars, Never Getting A Shot!!
My punches’ll leave ya neck disabled! Spits will split ya in half while I wreck ya fatal..
And its good u put A&R in ya name…
Cuz you sure as hell wont ever see one with a Record Label..!!!!

JHaze Was His Last Battle...Dont understand bars dont vote
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Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.

DOSIA THE GOAT!
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check it..


If our verses stood tall, ud be under a foot small.. cuz this honestly wasnt a good brawl...
See I go the distance! now witness mah punches RUSH YD's like runnin the football !!
You a retarded queer tryna bite ya own ear while I rip apart n smear ur bars with shears..
You should buy some condoms.. cuz u'll need protection now ITS GETTING HARDER HERE!!
Just ask Rick..mah raps Rude, I usually savor meals but to me ur just fast food..
And since im in a bad mood.. Ill be quick tah Chow Yun faster than that Fat dude!!**
Forced nameplays wont get you a spot here, n winning DQ's is just creatin suspicion..
Now imma prove u suck dick when I kneel/Neil Young like that canadian musician!!!
And like einstein's theory..Y equals emcee squared!! so what do U KNOW nigga?!
Oh.. he's also known as DOS?? Well then you just lost to numero UNO nigga!!



haha that was fun


**Chow Yun Fat is that actor from Pirates of the Carribean 3 and DragonBall Evolution if yall didn't know..

>:[ if u dont understand, ur dumb.. jk

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You better prey u last…with yo gay ass raps anything u say ill smash…
All u spits ‘Garbage’…So A.R.V. suits u well since ur trailer trash..!!

Nice opener, 4/5 Due to the fact the idea is played but you structured it well

Im a blaze some hash…cuz listening to this clown is Totally Boring…
And Someone Call Al Gore…
Cuz his lines are so Watered Down…He probly started global warming…!!

I like. A political vibe is always nice to see in a battle.
3/5

Dude thought beating ‘J’ was nuff to challenge me, must be going thru a joke phase…
After 1 battle u turn pro? Dog I burn dro everyday…how hard is it to smoke haze..!!

^^ Double diss, Nice form. 3/5

I deserve to be the champ! Gimmi the title, the belt nigga gimmi my spot…
Cuz when I got it…
Your whack ass will be like Underage Kids in bars, Never Getting A Shot!!

^^ This made me laugh. 4/5

My punches’ll leave ya neck disabled! Spits will split ya in half while I wreck ya fatal..
And its good u put A&R in ya name…
Cuz you sure as hell wont ever see one with a Record Label..!!!!
^^ FIRE, 5/5 for sure. Great closer.

19/25



If our verses stood tall, ud be under a foot small.. cuz this honestly wasnt a good brawl...
See I go the distance! now witness mah punches RUSH YD's like runnin the football !!
^^ nice, great timing for that bar, Wildcard game was badass!! lol 4/5

You a retarded queer tryna bite ya own ear while I rip apart n smear ur bars with shears..
You should buy some condoms.. cuz u'll need protection now ITS GETTING HARDER HERE!!

^^ 0/5
That bar comes off like you dissed yourself.
You may argue this, but it is your job to relay
the meaning of your bars in the bars to the reader.
So the simple fact that it "can" be taken as a diss
to one's self is cause enough for my rating.

"I award you no points, may god have mercy on your soul!"


Just ask Rick..mah raps Rude, I usually savor meals but to me ur just fast food..
And since im in a bad mood.. Ill be quick tah Chow Yun faster than that Fat dude!!**

4/5 I like the reference in this bar.

Forced nameplays wont get you a spot here, n winning DQ's is just creatin suspicion..
Now imma prove u suck dick when I kneel/Neil Young like that canadian musician!!!

2/5 Not feeling that at all and I'm Canadian...

And like einstein's theory..Y equals emcee squared!! so what do U KNOW nigga?!
Oh.. he's also known as DOS?? Well then you just lost to numero UNO nigga!!

I consider my self an intelligent person, maybe I just didnt get this one (Isnt it E=MC2?)
2/5 but only cause it rhymed.

12/25


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You better prey u last…with yo gay ass raps anything u say ill smash…
All u spits ‘Garbage’…So A.R.V. suits u well since ur trailer trash..!!

3.5/5 Nice flow, punch was nice!

Im a blaze some hash…cuz listening to this clown is Totally Boring…
And Someone Call Al Gore…
Cuz his lines are so Watered Down…He probly started global warming…!!

Meh, not bad 2.5/5

Dude thought beating ‘J’ was nuff to challenge me, must be going thru a joke phase…
After 1 battle u turn pro? Dog I burn dro everyday…how hard is it to smoke haze..!!

3/5 Nice bar, but wasn't really hitting hard. more directed to Haze imo!


I deserve to be the champ! Gimmi the title, the belt nigga gimmi my spot…
Cuz when I got it…
Your whack ass will be like Underage Kids in bars, Never Getting A Shot!!

played concept imo...worded nice tho 3/5

My punches’ll leave ya neck disabled! Spits will split ya in half while I wreck ya fatal..
And its good u put A&R in ya name…
Cuz you sure as hell wont ever see one with a Record Label..!!!!

LOL 4.5/5

16.5


If our verses stood tall, ud be under a foot small.. cuz this honestly wasnt a good brawl...
See I go the distance! now witness mah punches RUSH YD's like runnin the football !!

lol, not the greatest but nice 3.5/5

You a retarded queer tryna bite ya own ear while I rip apart n smear ur bars with shears..
You should buy some condoms.. cuz u'll need protection now ITS GETTING HARDER HERE!!

Flow was ILL Punch Average 3/5

Just ask Rick..mah raps Rude, I usually savor meals but to me ur just fast food..
And since im in a bad mood.. Ill be quick tah Chow Yun faster than that Fat dude!!**

LOL 4/5

Forced nameplays wont get you a spot here, n winning DQ's is just creatin suspicion..
Now imma prove u suck dick when I kneel/Neil Young like that canadian musician!!!

Lil forced, but the Punch hit Hard 4/5

And like einstein's theory..Y equals emcee squared!! so what do U KNOW nigga?!
Oh.. he's also known as DOS?? Well then you just lost to numero UNO nigga!!

meh not bad 3.5/5

17.5



close battle!!



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....i said if u dont understant dont vote quix u must not of understood that global warming line seems like u didnt either def, it was based more on the watered down wordplay bout his lines.

all good and very nice battle family!

1-1 ups

-- Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:21 am --

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Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.

DOSIA THE GOAT!
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Killer lines---
You better prey u last…with yo gay ass raps anything u say ill smash…
All u spits ‘Garbage’…So A.R.V. suits u well since ur trailer trash..!!
Im a blaze some hash…cuz listening to this clown is Totally Boring…
And Someone Call Al Gore…
Cuz his lines are so Watered Down…He probly started global warming…!!
Dude thought beating ‘J’ was nuff to challenge me, must be going thru a joke phase…
After 1 battle u turn pro? Dog I burn dro everyday…how hard is it to smoke haze..!!

"Funny as hell closer..."
My punches’ll leave ya neck disabled! Spits will split ya in half while I wreck ya fatal..
And its good u put A&R in ya name…
Cuz you sure as hell wont ever see one with a Record Label..!!!!
4/5

A.R.V.
Just ask Rick..mah raps Rude, I usually savor meals but to me ur just fast food..
And since im in a bad mood.. Ill be quick tah Chow Yun faster than that Fat dude!!**
LMFAO!!!!!
But after that, you pretty much tried a little too hard. Especially that "Getting harder in here" line.. not quite sure you put that together right. And that closer was awful Arv, just awful.

3/5

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Thanks 4 Votes...

2-1
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Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.

DOSIA THE GOAT!
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2-1

pls stop swaying against people who dont vote for u. its kinda annoying reading a comeback from u when it doesnt go ur way. thanks
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Um I Wasnt Swaying Or Trying To. I Was Explaining That Line. If U See I Was Tlking To Both Who Voted.
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Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.

DOSIA THE GOAT!
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Didnt know...wont say nothin or explain anymore.
Your Okay....Im A Beast.
Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.

DOSIA THE GOAT!
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