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(Round 1)Sequence Vs Symbolikull

Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 4:29 am
by 16 Micz
8 Bars( 1 Bar = 1 Line)
Due In 3 Days
Topic : The Dream Of A Drug Addict
Categories To Judge On


Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-

Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 5:50 am
by ~Symbolikull~

Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 1:44 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
Im “Fixin to Free“, my curious mind as a “Promiscuous Teen“, decided to “Visit the Scene“,
The “Visions Serene“, “Is It a Dreamâ€

Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 9:43 pm
by MesaR
You can sorta-see i go in my own world with a large stock Of E.
And Everything Was Cheap, And Even Better Everything I Got Was Free.
Ruians-My-Hopes, Of Quitting When I Get Cravings Of Shoorms-And-Coke.
Try Not To Croak, But Ill Probley Choke, With All These Fumes-In-My-Throat.
Its Gotta Be My Luckey Score, To Smoke A Blunt Even If Just Two-Or-More,
And Pay For No Fuckin New Hinges, When These Cops Bust Through-My-Door.
I dream About Not Going Out And Buying The Drugs, When They Could Just Deliver-The-Stuff.
And Not Be Caught, And Handled In Cuffs, And I Dont Die With The Toxic Shit In My Liver-N-Guts.

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:39 am
by ~Symbolikull~
i dont think this verse should be excepted. the last time we met in the tag tourny you were late, now your late again... how hard is it to make a fuckin deadline.


Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:26 am
by MesaR

well dock me a vote i couldnt give to shits.

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:46 am
by ~Symbolikull~
im not dockin you a vote, its the point of doin somethin that you signed up for willingly knowin that there was a deadline to meet, so knowin that meet that deadline, it isnt that hard...

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 11:05 am
by SlickMex
I think Sym had a better flow to his and better multis imo..
Really liked this line
"Im “Driftin away from the Accomplishments“, steady “Slippin in -n- out of my Consciousness“,
Ona “Mission to see all of the Constellates“, wit no wings Ive “Risen to be above the Continents“,"

Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme-Sym

Clean Sweep imo

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 11:06 am
by ~Symbolikull~
is that a vote????

wheres the cats?

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:35 pm
by LadySam
nice verses. symbolikul took this tho.
his multis were better and he played with the topic better

fav line:
My eyelids catch “Denies that are as Pure as the Oceans“, im not addicted “My Mind only Fears bein Awoken"

Multis- symb
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme- symb
Creativity- symb
Structure- symb
Vocab- symb

good job tho sequence.

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:44 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
2-0 UppIN

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:33 pm
by Lawgix
multies- symbolikull
rhyme Scheme- symbolikull
creativity- symbolikull
structure- symbolikull
vocab- symbolikull

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:28 pm
by ~Symbolikull~
thanx for votin guys and girl

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:36 pm
by complexity
All sym...


Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 3:34 am
by Cee4
Symbolikull on all 5 categorys

Vote = Symbolikull