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(Round 1)Sequence Vs Symbolikull
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 4:29 am
8 Bars( 1 Bar = 1 Line)
Due In 3 Days
Topic : The Dream Of A Drug Addict
Categories To Judge On
NO DISSING YOUR OPPONENT!
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 5:50 am
Posted: Thu Jul 05, 2007 1:44 pm
Im â€œFixin to Freeâ€œ, my curious mind as a â€œPromiscuous Teenâ€œ, decided to â€œVisit the Sceneâ€œ,
The â€œVisions Sereneâ€œ, â€œIs It a Dreamâ€
Posted: Sun Jul 08, 2007 9:43 pm
You can sorta-see i go in my own world with a large stock Of E.
And Everything Was Cheap, And Even Better Everything I Got Was Free.
Ruians-My-Hopes, Of Quitting When I Get Cravings Of Shoorms-And-Coke.
Try Not To Croak, But Ill Probley Choke, With All These Fumes-In-My-Throat.
Its Gotta Be My Luckey Score, To Smoke A Blunt Even If Just Two-Or-More,
And Pay For No Fuckin New Hinges, When These Cops Bust Through-My-Door.
I dream About Not Going Out And Buying The Drugs, When They Could Just Deliver-The-Stuff.
And Not Be Caught, And Handled In Cuffs, And I Dont Die With The Toxic Shit In My Liver-N-Guts.
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 12:39 am
i dont think this verse should be excepted. the last time we met in the tag tourny you were late, now your late again... how hard is it to make a fuckin deadline.
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:26 am
well dock me a vote i couldnt give to shits.
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:46 am
im not dockin you a vote, its the point of doin somethin that you signed up for willingly knowin that there was a deadline to meet, so knowin that meet that deadline, it isnt that hard...
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 11:05 am
I think Sym had a better flow to his and better multis imo..
Really liked this line
"Im â€œDriftin away from the Accomplishmentsâ€œ, steady â€œSlippin in -n- out of my Consciousnessâ€œ,
Ona â€œMission to see all of the Constellatesâ€œ, wit no wings Ive â€œRisen to be above the Continentsâ€œ,"
Clean Sweep imo
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 11:06 am
is that a vote????
wheres the cats?
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:35 pm
nice verses. symbolikul took this tho.
his multis were better and he played with the topic better
My eyelids catch â€œDenies that are as Pure as the Oceansâ€œ, im not addicted â€œMy Mind only Fears bein Awoken"
Rhyming/Rhyme Scheme- symb
good job tho sequence.
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:44 pm
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:33 pm
rhyme Scheme- symbolikull
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:28 pm
thanx for votin guys and girl
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 5:36 pm
Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 3:34 am
Symbolikull on all 5 categorys
Vote = Symbolikull